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The birth & death of industry

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Taken outside the factory of the birth place of industry and the industrial revolution. Once the pinnacle of science & technology its is now abandoned to the scrap heap.

Brand:NIKON
Camera:Nikon Coolpix P7100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:29 Mar 2013 - 4:35 PM
Focal Length:6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/640sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:The birth & death of industry
Username:goexplorephotography goexplorephotography
Uploaded:16 Apr 2013 - 3:27 PM
Tags:General, Urban landscape
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7435 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1024 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2013 - 4:43 PM

This is powerful, and very well seen - I particularly like the tension created by the angles of the wheel and the wall, pulling against each other.
The framing of the name is effective - can I suggest that there's a good alternative square crop to be had from the upper part of the frame, which would simplify that frame?
Hope you won't be offended by the suggestion.
Moira

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goexplorephotography

Im not offend, in fact its quite a good idea. The bottom corner looks a bit messy.
Ive upload a cropped version.

Garreth

Last Modified By goexplorephotography at 16 Apr 2013 - 5:46 PM

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7435 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1024 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2013 - 5:48 PM

Yes, V2 works for me. I might have taken it a bit higher, but you've got a diagonal hitting the bottom right corner which is strong.
Square contains lines much more tautly.
Cheers,
Moira

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goexplorephotography

RE version 2


Quote: I might have taken it a bit higher

My original thought was to take it higher, but i found the sky in the top right corner became too distracting. I Also really liked the diagonal line from the bottom right.
I do like to look for a lot of line and direction coming in and out of corners.
Thanks for the suggestion

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