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I feel now, I started tune changes the colour manually. Moving the slider... and I feel addicted. I saw some good clouds from willie and the other. But for beginner like me, what i have done here is amzing. Unedit image, i put in the mod.

Brand:Samsung
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Mar 2012 - 5:06 PM
Focal Length:2.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.6
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/951sec
ISO:50
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
Title:The Clouds
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:16 Mar 2012 - 1:11 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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SimonAlesbrook
16 Mar 2012 - 12:07 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

It is a nice try and good cloud formations can create striking images themselves without any other subject matter.

I personally prefer the original the unedited version, I think if you played around with curves and brigthness/contrast, you could have acheived a better effect without the halo around the trees.

Good effort though, keep it up and enjoy experimenting, it is the best way to improve and learn.

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pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1599 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2012 - 7:15 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

You seem very happy to have manipulated the cloud picture, Muhamad, and it's good to see you having a go. It can be a lot of fun watching your pictures change and improve.
As Simon says, there is a halo around the trees, and you have also produced a dark area at the top.
I think you have also used a touch too much contrast.
Stay with simple adjustments while you are learning, such as saturation, brightness/contrast, levels or curves. Play with the settings until you achieve the desired effect.
The tree is a strong silhouette against the sky, and the clouds have interesting formations.
I have done a modification where I used saturation and levels.
Pamela.

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
20 Mar 2012 - 4:55 AM

Thank u Simon,Pam. Yes, you are right. I will stay with simple adjustments while I am learning. The dark area in the top because I add vignette filter.

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