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At some point during a long-distance run, they say you meet the wall. Perhaps this is what it feels like, when every nerve and sinew is screaming for respite, yet something deep, deep in the inner depths of your soul doesn't allow you to give up, and suddenly you are emerging again into the light...



Is this what it is like?
I do not know.
I have never been there.
Do I want to go there?........Tjaa....

V2 as a b&w version...

Many thanks for all your recent comments and your great uploads.

Thanks for bothering.

Malc

From Monday I have the task of being Guest Editor....pleasure and pain???

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:EF70-200mm f/2.8L IS II USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:28 Apr 2012 - 3:14 PM
Focal Length:200mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Partial
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:The Darkest Moment
Username:saltireblue saltireblue
Uploaded:5 May 2012 - 7:47 PM
Tags:Athletes, Long distance running, Norway, Oslo, Portraits / people
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill (Critique Team)
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5 May 2012 - 7:51 PM
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I want V2 for a) the frames of his glasses and b) the flying mud comes over better. But V2 would make a fabulous poster.
I covet this one, it's a sport I'd dearly love to photograph. You've captured the isolation of personal struggle.
Moira

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WhiteRose1
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5 May 2012 - 8:00 PM
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Been there, done that .... I can feel his pain which you've captured so well.

Dave

jasonrwl
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5 May 2012 - 8:17 PM
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Really interesting image this Malc. Can't decide which I like best. I think I might have been tempted to crop it into more of a portrait format becasue not sure whether the space on the left adds that much. Just a thought.
Great image though.
Jason

saeidNL
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5 May 2012 - 8:32 PM
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Two stunning and fantastic capture,very well done,
saeid

franken
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5 May 2012 - 9:27 PM
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Version 2 is superb!

Ken

mrswoolybill
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5 May 2012 - 9:43 PM
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Quote: I think I might have been tempted to crop it into more of a portrait format becasue not sure whether the space on the left adds that much. Just a thought.

No way! The space on the left is his dark torment, he's looking into the abyss. Plus the fact that he is moving right to left adds to the depressive feel. I'm getting to like this one more and more.
Moira

mrswoolybill
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5 May 2012 - 9:46 PM
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PS Just noticed what you are doing next week. Be prepared for an awful lot of birds of the feathered variety... Wink

woolybill1
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5 May 2012 - 9:53 PM
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The mono for me, Malc. Reduces all the other emotional possibilities to a minimum to focus on the torment.
Keeping the space on the left gives the runner space to move into, ensuring the torment continues.

I was considered a reasonable athlete at school (school athletics captain, not that it involved anything other than glory Wink) But I couldn't cope with any race longer than about 400metres, so in a cross-country race I would be 200m ahead of the field after the first 400m only to spend the rest of the course on my knees. Cruelty to dumb animals it was.

Have just reviewed the two versions. V2 it is. Excellent.

Regards
Bill

AnnChown
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5 May 2012 - 10:07 PM
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These are excellent Malcolm! I like both but slightly prefer v1. Good luck next week - I'm going to be away so will miss your awards.
Ann

taggart
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5 May 2012 - 10:15 PM
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Looks like how i would feel if I were to try to do the!

Michaela_Solway
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5 May 2012 - 11:09 PM
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2 excellent images.. V1 speaks for itself,.. V2 opens up to more interpretation.. Great execution

mikbee
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5 May 2012 - 11:50 PM
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My only claim to athletic fame Malc was an egg and spoon race.
And it is to my eternal shame that 48 years later I will admit I cheated !!
Good luck with your GE week.
I think I would rather do a long distance run blindfolded.
(Mind you,I would make sure the blindfold was see through !!)
Mick.

SlowSong
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6 May 2012 - 7:09 AM
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Pure pain. Not for me. Excellent moment in time.
Chris

lifesnapper
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6 May 2012 - 9:45 AM
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Great work Malc, I like both versions, but V1 just makes the winning post for me.

John Smile

woolybill1
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6 May 2012 - 11:13 AM
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I've just had this and No pain, no gain on-screen side by side. Much as I like the latter, this one says more by saying less. Brilliant photo, I'd be proud to have it in my pf.
MrsW has it shortlisted too but I got there first!
Regards
Bill

TrevBatWCC
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6 May 2012 - 2:10 PM
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A great use of light here, Malc, and really captures the moment Smile Both versions work well, but it's V1 for me Wink
Trev Smile

LexEquine
6 May 2012 - 6:22 PM
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'It is a really Tough decision, for me,' Today, Malc,...so I have to give "1/2 Vote" to each Image~~ Smile

Artistic photographic Work,...indeed~

~ Peter

imagio
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6 May 2012 - 8:40 PM
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Both work for me Malc..

annettep38
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6 May 2012 - 11:22 PM
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very interesting.
I like no 2 for the brutal, raw force shown in it.

helenlinda
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7 May 2012 - 4:50 PM
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For me this works best in v2 - very dramatic. Hopefully you will look in better shape than this at the end of your marathon week WinkWinkWink
Helen

Glostopcat
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7 May 2012 - 9:16 PM
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The grit and determination he's showing to complete the event comes across superbly in these. You'd do well to heed Helen's warning, it will be a marathon task looking through all those uploads each day, rather you than me!Wink

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
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11 May 2012 - 8:23 AM
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Well isolated here Malc, both version work.
Regards Richard

AnneWorner
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12 May 2012 - 9:17 AM
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Han venter nok på annen runde av adrenalinet - kom det eller gikk han virkelig rett i veggen. To forskjellige følelser ved disse. Mer smerte og utmattelse synes i v1, men den liker egentlig virkningen i v2 best - den er rå!

AT

NeilWigan
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13 May 2012 - 9:27 PM
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I will take your word for it ,maybe.

ChristineD
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14 May 2012 - 3:36 PM
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Brilliant images, v1 for me.

ElmsArt
15 May 2012 - 9:04 AM
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Cannot choose, both say so much about what he is gong through. Have not been there physically, but mentally, yes have been there. You captured the pain perfectly.

Jackie

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16 May 2012 - 6:47 PM
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Fantastic image.
SANJEEV

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