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@50, f/9, 1/20 shutter, iso 100, a new processing method,


any kinds of comments and critiques are very much welcome, whether it looks good or not, can you share your opinion...

Title:THE HAWKER
Username:clicknimagine clicknimagine
Uploaded:13 Jun 2010 - 1:17 PM
Camera:Canon EOS 500D
Lens:Canon 50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Tags:Face, Fashion, Hawker, India, Photo journalism, Portrait, Portraits / people, Street photography, Street portrait, Wedding / social
Votes:18

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CarolG
CarolG (e2 Member)
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88 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece9 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 1:36 PM
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An excellent image, well cropped and presented. Carol

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QuinnyA
13 Jun 2010 - 1:49 PM
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Sorry - not really happening for me - too central on the eyes and far too much of the head gear - I know what you are trying to portray but if the carrier of goods was the object them you needed a much higher camera angle – all that a side!! - a bit of a twist, a crop and a bit of details enhancement and WOW – nice image, - Cheers Andy

I like the desaturated look.

Thanks Carol/Andy/smiler, thanks a lot friends, what you are trying to say Andy, i have that version too, and it is not cropped Carol, but i am trying to know your opinion about the processing, honestly, where it is to improve...

Last Modified By clicknimagine at 13 Jun 2010 - 1:55 PM
QuinnyA
13 Jun 2010 - 2:24 PM
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Rahul, what did Carol say about processing? - Lost me!! - my comment was simply about the composition – which I did not find great, as this image stands, I can see the intention of the image as you took it but for me it does not work – sorry if we offended you - Andy

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill (e2 Member)
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55 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom166 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2010 - 3:28 PM
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The composition works reasonably well for me, but not one of your strongest. I'd like a slice cropped off from the right side - I find both the ear and the bit of rope bottom right quite distracting.
Re the processing, it's an effect that I like generally but I think I'd prefer this as straight b&w. Here the top and bottom of the frame seem detached from each other, the 50/50 vertical split would work better for me without the distraction of colour.
Moira

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Thanks Andy/Moira, NO ANDY, YOUR COMMENT HAS NEVER OFFENDED ME, please do not think it otherwise, all your opinions are helpful in the way to develop my works...

Roly
Roly (e2 Member)
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Roly vcard Wales
13 Jun 2010 - 8:23 PM
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Interesting shot Rahul and well processed.

Ray42
Ray42 (e2 Member)
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Ray42 vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2010 - 7:09 AM
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An interesting shot

NobbytheNobster
NobbytheNobster (e2 Member)
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33 forum postsNobbytheNobster vcard England5 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jun 2010 - 12:18 PM
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I love this shot.
Well taken.
Ricky.

thanks Roly/Ray/Ricky, thanks a lot friends...

Petro
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South Africa
14 Jun 2010 - 8:36 PM
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Definitely one of my fav's, really very well done, excellent 'clear' image...you really captured the 'soul'
P

thanks a lot Petro for the UA, it is really very much appreciated...

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