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@50, f/9, 1/20 shutter, iso 100, a new processing method,
any kinds of comments and critiques are very much welcome, whether it looks good or not, can you share your opinion...
| Title: | THE HAWKER |
| Username: | |
| Uploaded: | 13 Jun 2010 - 1:17 PM |
| Camera: | Canon EOS 500D |
| Lens: | Canon 50mm f/1.8 II |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Tags: | Face, Fashion, Hawker, India, Photo journalism, Portrait, Portraits / people, Street photography, Street portrait, Wedding / social |
| Votes: | 18 |
Comments
Sorry - not really happening for me - too central on the eyes and far too much of the head gear - I know what you are trying to portray but if the carrier of goods was the object them you needed a much higher camera angle – all that a side!! - a bit of a twist, a crop and a bit of details enhancement and WOW – nice image, - Cheers Andy
Thanks Carol/Andy/smiler, thanks a lot friends, what you are trying to say Andy, i have that version too, and it is not cropped Carol, but i am trying to know your opinion about the processing, honestly, where it is to improve...
Rahul, what did Carol say about processing? - Lost me!! - my comment was simply about the composition – which I did not find great, as this image stands, I can see the intention of the image as you took it but for me it does not work – sorry if we offended you - Andy

The composition works reasonably well for me, but not one of your strongest. I'd like a slice cropped off from the right side - I find both the ear and the bit of rope bottom right quite distracting.
Re the processing, it's an effect that I like generally but I think I'd prefer this as straight b&w. Here the top and bottom of the frame seem detached from each other, the 50/50 vertical split would work better for me without the distraction of colour.
Moira

Thanks Andy/Moira, NO ANDY, YOUR COMMENT HAS NEVER OFFENDED ME, please do not think it otherwise, all your opinions are helpful in the way to develop my works...
thanks a lot Petro for the UA, it is really very much appreciated...
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