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continuing with this series today looking back as we commenced our walk - the house at Welford Pk. the light seemingly against us but worth showing methinks.
Many thanks for all c/c's on yesterdays upload always grateful for your time. I promise to catch up later, still chasing my backside but good to be busy rather than sitting on my haunches with nowt to occupy my timeSmile
dont ask how I managed V2 I tried a few things and would not be able to comfortably do it again, I am in a fog at the moment where camera raw is concernedWink
Time permitting V5 may be the best of the daySmile

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-70.0 mm f/3.5-4.5
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:15 Feb 2012 - 1:12 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.4
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:the house
Username:pluckyfilly pluckyfilly
Uploaded:21 Feb 2012 - 7:59 AM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel
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Rolepics
Rolepics (e2 Member)
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21 Feb 2012 - 8:11 AM
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Lovely composition and colour tones and some interesting little details. I like the swan and its reflection - Carole

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achieverswales
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21 Feb 2012 - 8:21 AM
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Love the POV and composition Ann, shadows are excellent, but I think a touch more contrast would make this even better.

Regards

Trev.

barbarahirst
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21 Feb 2012 - 8:24 AM
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A lovely scene .. including swan

CarolG
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21 Feb 2012 - 8:41 AM
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The swan makes this image, Ann Smile Carol

susanbarton
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21 Feb 2012 - 9:10 AM
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A great shot and composition. Love the swan but prefer the light in V2

Susan

mrswoolybill
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21 Feb 2012 - 9:15 AM
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V2 conveys the light better - but why clone out the swan???
Moira

pluckyfilly
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21 Feb 2012 - 9:16 AM
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Quote: V2 conveys the light better - but why clone out the swan???
Moira

I didnt it disappeared in a cloud of photoshop and not knowing what I was doingSad

Maiwand
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21 Feb 2012 - 9:17 AM
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Superb shot Ann. The whole scene IMO is a delight. Maybe would have helped with just a tad more contrast ( V2 is better ) but thats a minor matter.
Ron

Last Modified By Maiwand at 21 Feb 2012 - 9:18 AM
mrswoolybill
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21 Feb 2012 - 9:36 AM
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Thanks for the pm - you've found the swan again! As you mentioned, V3 does look over-sharpened to me, particularly in the foreground reeds - but I don't share the current obsession with sharpening.
Moira

achieverswales
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21 Feb 2012 - 9:59 AM
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Hi Ann
V3 is better, you only had to open in Photoshop and go to Brightness and Contrast and just slightly adjust the contrast to make a difference.

Regards

Trev.

pluckyfilly
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21 Feb 2012 - 10:08 AM
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Quote: Hi Ann
V3 is better, you only had to open in Photoshop and go to Brightness and Contrast and just slightly adjust the contrast to make a difference.

Regards

Trev.

I know Trev but I was trying to be cleverWink

RonnieAG
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21 Feb 2012 - 10:09 AM
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Very nicely composed shot, Ann: love the slightly lower light levels in V 1 and the overall warmth of the scene, so it's V 1 for me. Like the presence of the swan too, and as Moira has indicated, V 3 does seem a tad oversharpened to me.
Ronnie.

Gray_ina
21 Feb 2012 - 10:15 AM
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Hi Ann v1 for me gray

Herge88
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21 Feb 2012 - 11:03 AM
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Nicely composed image Ann, I did decide for a change as you have four versions to read all the other comments. As it is I pretty much agree with everything Moira has said, version two for me has a much more balanced look regarding the light, V3 is definitely way over sharpened to the point its distracting. Unfortunately all digital images require some sharpening especially if you are shooting raw, personally I don't do any of the sharpening in the raw converter, rather I use the unsharp mask tool in Photoshop, I believe it gives you more control. Still everyone will have their own views on that, but for me V2 works the best, a well composed and well balanced image.

Best Matt

gingerdelight
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21 Feb 2012 - 1:40 PM
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V1 for me Ann - love it!
Carol

James_C
21 Feb 2012 - 2:18 PM
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You may be in a fog but, for me, V2 and V3 are the best. Both well composed with good light. My only down is that they seem a little over sharpened to me.

James

WhiteRose1
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21 Feb 2012 - 2:37 PM
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Gosh Ann, so many choices, so many decisions. I'm with Ronnie on this - prefer the lower light levels and the swan. The actual composition is really good, has a lovely balance to it.

Dave

bricurtis
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21 Feb 2012 - 3:47 PM
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I think V1 has a good atmospheric look Ann. V3 & V5 do look over sharpened.
If you want control over your sharpening you don't want to be using the USM. High Pass filter layer is the way to go.
Brian.

danbrann
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21 Feb 2012 - 3:49 PM
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Generally a fine set Ann.

mikbee
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21 Feb 2012 - 3:52 PM
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Good set Ann.
Prefer V2.
And I am going to send you all my bills,
to make them disappear when you are working in PS !!
Mick.

Hop-A-Long
21 Feb 2012 - 4:46 PM
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Nice set. I do like V5, great colours.

Andy

MossyOak
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21 Feb 2012 - 7:42 PM
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My vote is for V1 Ann. Good exposure and composition
Richard

Glostopcat
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21 Feb 2012 - 10:25 PM
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A superbly composed riverscape Ann, v1 is by far the most natural and the best.

brownsilent
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22 Feb 2012 - 7:18 AM
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Quote: Very nicely composed shot, Ann: love the slightly lower light levels in V 1 and the overall warmth of the scene, so it's V 1 for me.

Completely agree with Ronnie.
Johanna

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