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We went on an "Old Farts Coach Trip" yesterday and one of the places we visited was Portland where we had some goodly nosh at the Lobster-Pot the waited for a "Glorious Sunset".

The sunset was a bit of a wash-out but I managed this + a couple more shots which I thought had potential so I'm putting it up for some Critiquing.

Feel free to pull it apart, modify or provide other feedback - all welcomed

(Please look at Large Version as its a waste of space small)

Camera:Canon EOS 350D
Lens:Canon 17-55 IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:The Last Cast
Username:brian1208 brian1208
Uploaded:3 Nov 2007 - 11:35 AM
Tags:Fishing, Landscape / travel, Portland, Portraits / people, Pulpit rock, Sunset
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andytvcams
andytvcams  1210396 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Nov 2007 - 11:51 AM


Quote: Feel free to pull it apart

Nothing to pull apart here Brian.
All the elements sit nicely in the frame.

Andy...

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jjimmyjimbones
3 Nov 2007 - 12:26 PM

i agree, its a super shot
jimmy

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wildvision148
3 Nov 2007 - 12:46 PM

Great shot love the fishermen on the rock,really welldone image,wouldnt change a thing.

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SueEley
SueEley  8271 forum posts Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
3 Nov 2007 - 1:47 PM

You're right it needs to be looked at larger - the rock looks a bit light in the small version, but big I think the whole thing works really well.

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brian1208
brian1208 e2 Member 1110597 forum postsbrian1208 vcard United Kingdom12 Constructive Critique Points
3 Nov 2007 - 2:13 PM

Thanks for the input Andy, Jimmy, Sam and Sue.

I've re-processed and made a slight mod to the development, putting the rock slightly darker and increased the impact of the sun + reflection a touch. It's probably not enough to make it posting here as a mod though.

I wasn't too sure of the composition, which is why I put it up for a crit - but you gave me the confidence to "tweak it" and run a print on A3+ paper and it looks excellent.

(One more for my next craft market! Smile

Last Modified By brian1208 at 3 Nov 2007 - 2:14 PM

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pennyspike
pennyspike  112068 forum posts United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
3 Nov 2007 - 6:42 PM

Glad the sun shone on you.
Classic Bill shot that suits the pano arrangement with the sun where it is.
It's one of the few places in the UK where you can see sunrise and sunset over water, (this time of year anyway).
A couple of weeks earlier and you would have found 20 epz-ers there, but not for sunset. (There wasn't one, so you've done better than we did.)

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brian1208
brian1208 e2 Member 1110597 forum postsbrian1208 vcard United Kingdom12 Constructive Critique Points
3 Nov 2007 - 7:20 PM

Thanks Penny - I would have liked to have joined you all, but family insisted on visiting and I'm told they must take priority! Smile

(Mind you - I've still got a crease on top of my head from the concrete lintel of your hut on my last visit, ouch!)

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