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photo taken on narrow lane close to where i live

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix G3
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:23 Jun 2012 - 3:39 PM
Focal Length:15mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.6
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/800sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:The Long Road Home
Username:dongood dongood
Uploaded:24 Jun 2012 - 11:24 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Lane, Road
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ahughes3
ahughes3 e2 Member 349 forum postsahughes3 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jun 2012 - 11:37 PM

Nice idea, but I think it's missing a couple of things. Firstly, the long road home implies and end destination of home, yet I can't see a house. Adding in a house would take the leading line of the road to a meaningful destination. I think it would also add a greater level of perspective. The second thing i would do is straighten up the road as it's slopeing down the the left. Even if you think your horizon is straight I would suggest that because of the size of the road in the frame, it needs to be straight and level. Other than that I like the concept and can see great potention with this shot.

Well done.

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dongood
dongood  2 United Kingdom
25 Jun 2012 - 6:02 PM

thank you for your comment i know what you mean about the road leaning to the left it was stright when i took the photo but the horrizon wasn,t so i straighted it using the telegraph pole in the distance as a reference

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