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Please let me know of anything that could or should have been done different regarding composition,presentation etc.Thanks, Les.

Camera:Sony A330
Lens:Tamron 28-300 Check out Totally Tamron!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Oct 2012 - 10:27 AM
Focal Length:35mm
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
ISO:100
Title:The Millennium Bridge.2.
Username:PEELO PEELO
Uploaded:4 Oct 2012 - 10:13 AM
Tags:Architecture, General
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Umberto_Vanni
Umberto_Vanni e2 Member 9366 forum postsUmberto_Vanni vcard Scotland
4 Oct 2012 - 10:39 AM

Nice but maybe you could have tried zooming out a bit. I think the crop is a little too close.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom854 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 3:58 PM

Technically excellent but not really enough bridge therefor me. A dramatic sky would also help.

Paul

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 5:22 PM

not too interesting. maybe a different angle will work better.

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pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1599 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 6:31 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I really like your previous picture of the bridge, Les.
As to this one, you have included some strong shapes and lines, have good detail and shadows, and an attractive sky that has a few little clouds but not enough to distract from your image. Your diagonal lines look nice the straight.
I would like to have seen a bit more of the bridge at the top and left. The arched shape stops at the top frame edge and part of it is cut off.
I like the way you have placed the top right diagonal into the corner, but would prefer a crop to that side with the bottom of the curve going into bottom right corner.
Going for a small part of the detail of the bridge is a good idea, emphasizing its structure and shape, and you had some nice light at the time of shooting.
If this is a crop of a larger shot, you could have a winner by cropping differently.
Pamela.

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prabhusinha
prabhusinha e2 Member 6prabhusinha vcard India3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 6:53 PM

This is fine.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10868 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2869 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 9:38 PM

Its super sharp and well exposed. It is a close crop. and for people who know the bridge this may be a little too close. But for people like me who have no reference, it can work, and I would suggest and even closer, more abstract crop, as in my mod as a possibility.



regards


Willie

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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61587 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 9:56 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

hi
i think we have to forget the bridge and the fact it is a bridge since it has lost its context and see if it works as an abstract reliant only upon the shapes and colours remaining.

the colours are nice and saturated without being overdone. its sharp all over and there isnt any clutter to distract and the shapes are harmonious and follow the rules of thirds and curves which often helps the strength of an image.

what is particularly nice is the way that things spring to corners like the top right and top left and the way the perspective has the suspension wires decreasing in centres as they recess.

on the down side id have preffered to see both walls of the tube as it completes its arc at the top of frame but othere than that i really like the graphic qualities of the image.

regards
Phil

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PEELO
PEELO e2 Member 2120 forum postsPEELO vcard England
5 Oct 2012 - 11:32 AM

Thanks to all of you for your comments,suggestions and advice,most welcome.I wasn't trying to show it as a bridge it was more an effort in showing the lines and curves against the contrast of the sky,by the comments i feel I almost got there but not quite!.Thanks to Willie for the mod(again).Please feel free to look at my pf and offer any suggestions as to where you think I may be going wrong or could improve,I am here to learn,Les.Grin

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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2012 - 1:55 PM

The sort of thing that would look good on canvas wall art as an abstract.

Frank

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