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Another from Havana.
Thanks for your time and for any comments/criticisms.
Also - many thanks to Moira (mrswoolybill), John (lifesnapper) and Michaela (Michaela-Solway) for their UAs for The high note - who all made my day!!
Ann

Camera:Canon EOS 60D
Lens:Sigma 17-70mm F2.8-4.5DCMacroAsp.IF HSM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 May 2012 - 12:00 AM
Focal Length:34mm
Aperture:f/11
Shutter Speed:1/20sec
ISO:100
Title:The open door
Username:AnnChown AnnChown
Uploaded:18 Jun 2012 - 7:17 PM
Tags:Architecture, Cuba, Havana, Landscape / travel, Portraits / people
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EAS
EAS (e2 Member)
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:19 PM
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Some great textures and tones as well as that serious look.

Ann

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill (Critique Team)
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:23 PM
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Lovely composition - all those vertical blocks, then the little face. And then the hole in the wall. There's a tension, because emotionally this is about the child, but I'm drawn to that hole!
Moira

andylea
andylea (e2 Member)
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:27 PM
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wonderful comp ann brilliant detail and textures super colours love that look a cracker nice one Wink
andy

morpheus1955
morpheus1955 (e2 Member)
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:29 PM
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Fantastic shot Ann, lovely textures and details and I love the little girls expression.

Hugh

woolybill1
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:30 PM
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Very cute and serious too . . .
Some remarkable tones and textures, and that intriguing hole in the wall . . .
Regards
Bill

marktc
marktc (e2 Member)
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:32 PM
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another super image Ann... fine colours and textures and the interesting little gathering in the bottom left????

derekhansen
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:41 PM
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Excellent gritty colour and detail Ann. You have captured the girl in a perfect pose and expression. The only negative point I would make is that the recessed (electrical?) box on the left tends to draw the eye and I might have cloned or cropped it out. Hope you dont mind me pointing that out because this is still an excellent image.
Derek

AnnChown
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:50 PM
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Quote: The only negative point I would make is that the recessed (electrical?) box on the left tends to draw the eye and I might have cloned or cropped it out. Hope you dont mind me pointing that out because this is still an excellent image.
Derek

Thanks for the comment about the electric box Derek - both Moira and Bill have mentioned it, so I think it will have to go! As you know, I'd rather somebody told me than not.... so thanks again!

Last Modified By AnnChown at 18 Jun 2012 - 7:52 PM
RonnieAG
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:55 PM
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Doesn't mrswoolybill analyse an image so well.....I have to go along with her comments completely.
I myself am not so sure about the recessed electrical box......whilst it might draw the eye, it's somewhat insecure state does fit in with the general dilapidation of the property, and is not a distraction for me.
Ronnie.

Last Modified By RonnieAG at 18 Jun 2012 - 7:57 PM
AnnChown
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18 Jun 2012 - 7:57 PM
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Quote: Doesn't mrswoolybill analyse an image so well.....I have to go along with her comments completely.
Ronnie.

Absolutely - in a nutshell every time! Smile

jdinne
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18 Jun 2012 - 8:06 PM
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Superb composition, colours, textures and of course the little girl. Excellent.

John

saeidNL
saeidNL (e2 Member)
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18 Jun 2012 - 8:16 PM
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Fantastic and great capture indeed,Like the textures, tonesand and brilliant detail in this one,
saeid

WhiteRose1
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18 Jun 2012 - 8:21 PM
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I'm with Ronnie on this one, Ann. The inclusion of a person in an image almost always becomes the focus of the image, especially one so beguiling as this girl. The hole here makes very little impact apart from, as stated, to re-inforce the bad state of repair of the building.

Dave

Len1950
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18 Jun 2012 - 8:47 PM
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Wonderful composition with superb textures and showing life as it is, top shot Ann.

Len

mrswoolybill
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18 Jun 2012 - 8:52 PM
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Ann leave the electrical box. I like tension, uncertainty!
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 18 Jun 2012 - 8:53 PM
taggart
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18 Jun 2012 - 9:12 PM
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100 %

and the electric connection stays---this is Cuba!

Michaela_Solway
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18 Jun 2012 - 9:20 PM
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Wonderful textures coming through Ann, with the lovely human touch again which makes it's so appealing.. What fuse box? WinkWink

SlowSong
SlowSong (e2 Member)
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18 Jun 2012 - 9:36 PM
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Perfect. Your pics of Cuba could seriously belong in a magazine Ann. All excellent.
Chris

sweetpea62
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18 Jun 2012 - 9:43 PM
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What a lovely image Ann,great capture..Lin

VivienO
18 Jun 2012 - 9:50 PM
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Another fantastic capture Ann. The faded colours of the tattered building and the expression on the little girl peeping out give such a sense of the place.
Vivien

franken
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18 Jun 2012 - 10:04 PM
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Excellent capture Ann, I'm also drawn to the hole in the wall!


Ken

mikbee
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18 Jun 2012 - 10:19 PM
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Another excellent bit of grot Ann,
and that includes the electrical box !!
Super shot.
Mick.

netta1234
netta1234 (e2 Member)
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18 Jun 2012 - 10:37 PM
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Super image with good colour and texture
Netta

annettep38
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18 Jun 2012 - 10:51 PM
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excellent. The girl's look between curiosity and caution! The compsosion and the wonderful textures.. could you ask for more!

fentiger
18 Jun 2012 - 11:02 PM
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A truly superb image ~ totally envious.

Albert

nonur
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19 Jun 2012 - 1:04 AM
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Exceptional and wonderful in every aspect and it includes the fuse box. However what impresses me most is the contrast between the aged worn out house with all the signs of wear and the very young girl looking out of the doorway. A thought provoking image with a hint of irony. It deserves all the awards, Ann!

CarolG
CarolG (e2 Member)
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19 Jun 2012 - 6:11 AM
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A wonderful composition, Ann, a super expression you have captured on her face, and I like her toes peeping out from the bottom of the door Smile Carol

Rock
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19 Jun 2012 - 7:25 AM
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A great grab shot .

Simply Wonderful.

Rock

barbarahirst
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19 Jun 2012 - 7:33 AM
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delightful ... all these images from Cuba have been wonderful .Keep them coming!

Rolepics
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19 Jun 2012 - 9:06 AM
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What a good capture. Lovely composition, colours and textures.
Carole

MartPics
19 Jun 2012 - 9:09 AM
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Fantastic shot Ann, well done, Awarded!

Martin.

ChiliMan
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19 Jun 2012 - 9:25 AM
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BRILLIANTLY captured, Ann, with the kid framed so beautifully by all those colours and textures.

Wonderful timing and shot SmileSmileSmileSmile

Andrew

Scottishlandscapes
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19 Jun 2012 - 9:43 AM
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A scene we would have taken for granted not that long ago in this country, but we have moved along a pace, whereas Cuba has been caught in a time lock by circumstances not always of their own doing.
Castro and his regime and a large chunk of American fear of the communist at the door has held the nation back at least half a century.
I like the inclusion of the hole it adds a balance to the composition which would change the image totally if not there.

Have another tree to your collection my friend.

Dougie

Lillian
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19 Jun 2012 - 10:25 AM
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How on earth did you manage to get a little girl to answer the door? superb image Ann
all this series need to go into a book!!!
Lillian

danbrann
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19 Jun 2012 - 11:33 AM
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Wonderful Ann. Such a tremendous image.

pamelajean
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19 Jun 2012 - 2:30 PM
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Absolutely charming, and the comments have been interesting to read. I'll sit on the fence with regard to the electric box.

AnnChown
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19 Jun 2012 - 4:00 PM
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Quote: Absolutely charming, and the comments have been interesting to read. I'll sit on the fence with regard to the electric box.

... and you're on the Critique Team Pamela!! SmileSmile

jonwebber
19 Jun 2012 - 5:28 PM
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No fence sitting here, the hole in the wall should stay. Unless someone is trying to sell the building . . .
jon

lifesnapper
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19 Jun 2012 - 5:55 PM
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What a smashing image Ann, and very in keeping with all your other shots from what must've been a wonderful Holiday. The comp' and colour are lovely, and the little Girls expression really make the picture what it is. Well done.

John Smile

Fefe
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19 Jun 2012 - 9:27 PM
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Great image! very well doneGrin
Diane

gajewski
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19 Jun 2012 - 10:07 PM
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Ann, this shot is a masterpiece. It has so much going for it -- most of all it tells a story. I also really like your composition here as well.
-=\Walter

Cor
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20 Jun 2012 - 8:37 AM
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Splendid in every way *****
Cor.

mashwood10
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20 Jun 2012 - 1:59 PM
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Had to vote for this one !!!Grin

Pam

jasonrwl
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20 Jun 2012 - 8:50 PM
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Another wonderful image Ann - you are so good at capturing these.
Jason

Glostopcat
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21 Jun 2012 - 11:26 PM
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Excellent street photography Ann, this is another fine addition to this fascinating series on Cuba

nicedayout
22 Jun 2012 - 2:43 PM
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Looks great love the timing. Jamie

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