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I took this picture a little while ago. The Red Arrows were doing some fantastic maneuvers. I just wish I had a better camera instead of my little point-and-shoot.

Camera:Ricoh Caplio R6
Lens:28-200 mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:The Red Arrows
Username:TakeTwo TakeTwo
Uploaded:19 Apr 2010 - 7:30 PM
Tags:Abstract, Action, Documentary, General, Photo journalism, Planes, Sports / action
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Jestertheclown
19 Apr 2010 - 10:35 PM

See my mod.
Jester.

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TakeTwo
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19 Apr 2010 - 10:53 PM

Unfortunately I had a wrong camera on me at the time, so I had to pay in quality. Thank you for modifying it, it looks much better.

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Jestertheclown
19 Apr 2010 - 11:14 PM

A pleasure.
Given time I would have blurred the smoke trails slightly and the same with the aircraft on the left which now doesn't look as it should.
Jester.

Edit; sorry, I've just realised you're a new member. Welcome to Epz.
I shall look forward to seeing more of your work.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 19 Apr 2010 - 11:15 PM

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pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
20 Apr 2010 - 4:25 PM

Hello, Roxy, and welcome to EPZ. Your camera did quite well, and there is good detail on the planes, but the colours in the trails has been diffused a lot by the bright sky background. Although the planes stand out nicely against the white, it's not ideal, and Jestertheclown's modification is an excellent idea. However, I would like to have seen more sky at the top of the frame, for the planes to fly into, so have done a modification FROM the other one, adding canvas to the top.
Pamela.

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