Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

The Shard......

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

Add Comment

Would you make any changes? Not sure if HDR works for me or not!

Any & all suggestions/comments welcomed good or bad

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D700 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:17.0-35.0 mm f/2.8-4.0
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:16 Jun 2012 - 4:24 AM
Focal Length:24mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/20.0
Shutter Speed:15sec
Exposure Comp:+1
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
Title:The Shard......
Username:lordposh lordposh
Uploaded:9 Jul 2012 - 8:52 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Hdr, Landscape, London, River thames, The Shard
VS Mode Rating 101 (100% won)
These stats show the percentage of wins and the rating score that your photo has achieved. You can go to the VS Mode by clicking on this icon.

Signup to e2

Signup to e2 to see which photo this has won or lost against in the vs mode
Votes:Voting Disabled
Critque wantedCritique Wanted
Modifications wanted Modifications Welcome (Upload a Modification)
Awards have been disabled on this photo

Comments

This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.
SueEley
SueEley e2 Member 8271 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2012 - 7:02 PM

I like the colours you have used, and the effect of the long exposure. I might have been tempted to crop out a chunk of the foreground water as there is not a lot of obvious interest in the bottom part - though, having tried it, I am not sure where would be the best place to crop and maybe what you have is right. The biggest problem for me is that this doesn't look straight. In fact, your verticals appear to be bang on, but your horizontals (taken from the bottom of the ship) are not. This suggests perspective distortion to me - that is, that you were looking at the scene from an angle. If I'm wrong, I apologise! I'm very tired after a really long day at work. Time to go and veg out, I think! Sue

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

lordposh
lordposh  1045 forum posts United Kingdom
11 Jul 2012 - 10:13 PM

Thanks Sue I will give your suggestion and hopefully re-post here.

Roger

Nominating Constructive Critique

Please ensure that you understand what is meant by Constructive Critique - see FAQ here. If you still wish to nominate this comment click Yes

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.