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Scanned this recently from a set shot a long time ago. Middle of a night shift actually in the fitting shop. Trying out a filter called 'Cosmos'. Might be a bit too much. (Electric arc welding can permanently damage eyes, so camera on tripod and my back to the welder. Shutter released remotely for each frame.. NEVER look directly at a weld arc.)

Mamiya 645 1000S with 80mm. 1/125 @ f8 and Fujichrome 100. Flash fill on manual with flash on extension lead and placed on his work bench, pointing at his head..

Scanned at 2400dpi with Epson 4990 flat bed and cleaned up. Some cloning and tone adjustment. Smart sharpen.

Paul

Camera:Mamiya M645 1000s
Lens:80mm
Title:The Welder
Username:paulbroad paulbroad
Uploaded:10 Jun 2013 - 7:29 AM
Tags:Arc, Dangerous., Electric, Portraits / people, Weld, Welder
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ErictheViking
ErictheViking e2 Member 1124 forum postsErictheViking vcard Scotland102 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 8:03 AM

Hi Paul
I think the use of the filter is just right it adds an element of drama to what could have been an image of a bright white splodge. Normally I'd suggest people don't chop off bits of limbs, but here I feel its not important. Its all about the flare and the star burst.

I have loaded a mod as I feel the background needs to be as dark as possible to compliment the brightness of the flare and preferably black. I did this by adjusting the levels to make contact with the edge of the histogram which has increased the contrast and darkened the background.

Let me know what you think

Erik

Last Modified By ErictheViking at 10 Jun 2013 - 8:05 AM

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Nigeve1
Nigeve1 e2 Member 1737 forum postsNigeve1 vcard United Kingdom84 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 8:04 AM

Amazing effect, great image.
Nigel

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 8:08 AM

Hello Eric, Not sure about being darker. It does add some strength but looses a bit of detail in the mask and bench. I had considered cropping even tighter but that would remove the full shape of the flared cosmos pattern?

Paul

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ErictheViking e2 Member 1124 forum postsErictheViking vcard Scotland102 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 8:18 AM

Hi Paul
I think it all depends on what is the focus of your image, if its the welder then I'd be looking at isolating the background from the welder and making fine adjustments to each independently. If the focus is the flare and the filter effect IMO the welder is part of the background.

Ultimately the mod was a general adjustment to demonstrate an effect which as you say adds strength to the image.

Erik

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richmowil
richmowil e2 Member 5259 forum postsrichmowil vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 8:49 AM

Amazing effect!! Nice image!! I like it a lot!!

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104023 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 11:35 AM

great effect...prefer the original SmileSmile

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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4211 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom129 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 11:38 AM

I like this image, a really good capture. I don't know about looking at an arc, just looking at this picture almost hurts my eyes!
Seems to me pretty good as is. Take me well outside any experience I've had. Near brilliant.
regards
Ian

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jun 2013 - 6:53 PM

Not criticising your mod at all, Eric. It is well done and produces a different effect. This is the personal opinion bit. I prefer to retain the detail, you have gone for more impact. In some cases, many in fact, I favour the impact route too. Like to see other peoples interpretation of what I have done.

What does disappoint, and has done for a long time, is that some images get a lot of comment, some hardly any. Not just mine, in general.

Often, when something really needs to be said, it is side stepped. A pity, but that is quite common in judging and critique circles.

Paul

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xwang
xwang  531 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2013 - 10:56 AM

I like the sparkling light....I've never seen different coloured sparking lights like this before.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2013 - 3:58 PM

It was a square Cokin system filter called COSMOS, jas. I think I still have it somewhere. They were quite impressive the first few times you used them, but then got rather boring and overdone. Does work here, I think.

Paul

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