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This was taken at camera club the other night...
No flash just using the overhead florescent to give a more natural darker side to the girls face.
It not fully right but I am happy with the out come..

Thank you all for kind votes and comments..

Dave

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3s Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:24.0-70.0 mm f/2.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Jul 2013 - 9:11 PM
Focal Length:52mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1250
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
Title:Thinking
Username:ugly ugly
Uploaded:4 Jul 2013 - 6:12 AM
Tags:General, Model, Person, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 7128 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece16 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 6:15 AM

She certainly loves her colours, Dave Wink Carol

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johnlw
johnlw e2 Member 7johnlw vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 6:23 AM

It looks like a good work though I'm no expert on lighting I think it's well done.
Regards John.

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HarrietH
HarrietH e2 Member 4264 forum postsHarrietH vcard Portugal
4 Jul 2013 - 6:24 AM

So you should be happy with the image, it is excellent. I hope this lovely girl never regrets having so much "colour" on her body.


Harriet

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Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
4 Jul 2013 - 6:26 AM

One very colourful model you had here Dave Smile A great photo me finks Smile

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WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41029 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England133 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 6:34 AM

Well posed and a harmony of colour, Dave.

Dave

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franken
franken e2 Member 113060 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 8:24 AM

Works for me-excellent character study.

Ken

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barbarahirst
barbarahirst e2 Member 6barbarahirst vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 8:28 AM

a colourful lass for sure
her bottom lip looks strange ... is she biting it?

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ugly
ugly e2 Member 6ugly vcard United Kingdom55 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 8:31 AM


Quote: A colourful lass for sure
her bottom lip looks strange ... is she biting it?

Yes she is biting bottom lip..

Dave

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 10:44 AM

Nicely focussed on the front arm and head.
Not an easy subject with so much going on fashion wise
but you've captured her 'personality' very well.
KateGrinGrinGrinGrin

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Growmore
Growmore e2 Member 5Growmore vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 10:45 AM

That's a great portrait and some wonderful colours!
Gary

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 1092 forum postsdudler vcard England262 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 11:26 AM

I have to say that fluorescents light is never my first choice: and somethign different would almsot certainly have given an even better result.

But the model has enough character (and colour) to make the result special anyway.

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Mrsbass
Mrsbass  1 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 12:07 PM

I wouldn't change anything about this image - the colour and shadows are superb adding depth to the portrait of this interesting lady.

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 12:16 PM

I like the pose and the expression. The lighting works well

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debu
debu  4 India
4 Jul 2013 - 1:06 PM

Lovely portrait.
debu

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mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 2:08 PM

Certainly a colourful girl Dave !!
Good shot.
Mick.

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ColleenA
ColleenA e2 Member 2162 forum postsColleenA vcard Australia3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 4:24 PM

Wow she sure is carrying some ink...a superb image capturing her personality so well...

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2801 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 5:39 PM

Apart from being way too yellow, its a really good shot David. I love the pose, the lip being bitten, the eyes, good light.


Ive uploaded a mod with the yellow corrected.




regards


Willie

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NDODS e2 Member 32925 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
4 Jul 2013 - 6:18 PM

Potentially a great image, good modification by Willie

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin

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brian17302
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4 Jul 2013 - 7:48 PM

Great pensive pose in this portrait
Regards Brian

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ugly
ugly e2 Member 6ugly vcard United Kingdom55 Constructive Critique Points
5 Jul 2013 - 6:26 AM


Quote: Apart from being way too yellow, its a really good shot David. I love the pose, the lip being bitten, the eyes, good light.


Ive uploaded a mod with the yellow corrected.




regards


Willie

I do like the mod and have had a go last night to see if I could do image that way. I think I choose the yellow type more as she looks very pasty and the yellow looks more like a tan. Thanks again I will be using her again in next few days and will take on board your comments...

Thank you..

Dave

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