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Hello again! I thought i'd have been able to keep up to date despite all of my college work... How wrong was I!
Anyway I have decided to upload some of my photos that I have taken throughout my first year in my Photography A Level.
I will be expecting results for my AS photography in august and will be sure to let you know what i achieved.

The intention for this photo was to show the different influences on a person through fashion and character from different subcultures, and i wanted to use the merged mug shot appearance to present three different influences in one image.
I like the transparency of the character as it makes her style and character seem very indefinite, but i think the brick wall background is too distracting for the image.
The strange colour scheme used was part of an inspiration from a photographer called Anna Gaskell who uses surreal and dreamlike scenes with odd colours in her photography.
Constructive critique is very welcome.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 1000D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Feb 2012 - 4:34 PM
Focal Length:55mm
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/6sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Three Faced
Username:kearney11 kearney11
Uploaded:4 Jun 2012 - 12:48 AM
Tags:Character, Culture, Digitally manipulated, Fashion, Girl, Mug shot, Portrait, Portraits / people, Teen, Teenager
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tonyguitar
4 Jun 2012 - 3:43 AM

Mostly I pick up a very attractive and healthy model with a nice physic. She is 'plunk' center. Why not 1/3rd left with the strongest profile looking towards center right?

These bricks look flat. Why not a greystone wall and side lighting at 6Tonguem? Your exif says 4:34pm, but the light looks more like 2:30pm. This is a work in progress and getting it right may take a little time.

Your model is a winner. You just need a good wall and better light quality and angle. TG

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Deep_Bhatia
4 Jun 2012 - 5:38 AM

Nicely captured. Deep

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kearney11
kearney11  3 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jun 2012 - 12:19 AM


Quote: Mostly I pick up a very attractive and healthy model with a nice physic. She is 'plunk' center. Why not 1/3rd left with the strongest profile looking towards center right?

These bricks look flat. Why not a greystone wall and side lighting at 6Tonguem? Your exif says 4:34pm, but the light looks more like 2:30pm. This is a work in progress and getting it right may take a little time.

Your model is a winner. You just need a good wall and better light quality and angle. TG

Thanks for the feedback, i'll be sure to consider these ideas when i am next taking photos!

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