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I took on board the comments made on a previous post and tried to get a better fixed point of focus, also went for lower ISO and longer exposure - I think it worked

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:EF-S15-85mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:25 Mar 2013 - 4:33 PM
Focal Length:17mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:2sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Through the Tube
Username:tolle13 tolle13
Uploaded:26 Mar 2013 - 7:01 AM
Tags:Long explosure, Motion blur, Specialist / abstract
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marc484ie
marc484ie  731 forum posts Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2013 - 7:40 AM

Cracking image great idea Well done!

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richmowil
richmowil e2 Member 5259 forum postsrichmowil vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2013 - 7:57 AM

Nice Image!! I like it a lot!!

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rajasekar
rajasekar  5 India2 Constructive Critique Points
26 Mar 2013 - 11:01 AM

Oh yeah! It worked well! Look at those light trails..Cool Shot Smile

Raja

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alistairfarrugia
alistairfarrugia Critique Team 2164 forum posts Malta88 Constructive Critique Points
5 Apr 2013 - 6:37 PM

I modified this image again and will upload - I like these, well done. I went for a 2:1 ratio here to differentiate from my other square crop on your other photo. With lines like this, you can be creative with composition and try different variants and see what appeals to you the most. With this one, I went for 2:1 to give the orange streak more prominence. Well done once again!

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alistairfarrugia
alistairfarrugia Critique Team 2164 forum posts Malta88 Constructive Critique Points
5 Apr 2013 - 6:40 PM

PS: I also think a simple frame adds a virtual"stop" that physically connects all lines together but at the same time tells the mind that the lines keep going on. I also feel like the sense of depth is enhanced if you give a border to the image - it sort of acts like a starting point for each line and you enhance the sense of perspective I guess.

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tolle13
tolle13  1
5 Apr 2013 - 10:30 PM

Thanks again Alistair, the framing is a great idea, the 2:1 crop adds impact and gives plenty of food for thought. I intend to try this shoot again in the near future and will certainly put your ideas to use.

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alistairfarrugia
alistairfarrugia Critique Team 2164 forum posts Malta88 Constructive Critique Points
6 Apr 2013 - 5:54 PM

Once again, I'm glad you like the mod. Keep it up!

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