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Lynne loves duotones. she said to me:"You really must try duotones... I promise you, once learned, never forgotten!" So I did. And not only duo, but trioGrin. NO, this is actually an accident. I didn't know how it worked, blindly clicking to find out what's on offer on PS. This is the result of black,magenta and 6a5d5d. Purely accidental, later I found that 6a5d5d was called pale grey. I think that Lynne is right. Duotones have a lot to offer that I didn't know before. I put this photo on, one is to say thanks to Lynne;second is for anyone who is interested in different tones to have a fun. I'll upload the colour version and B&W on MOD section for you to have a play.. if you don't know how to convert colour to duo, trio...you may contact Lynne, she has a very well written tutorial for youSmile. Thanks for looking.
BTW, Lynne had converted my previous uploading into four duotones, I'll upload them for you to have a look as well. Thank you, Lynne.
The photo was taken near Southwell Minister.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:EF-S18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:22 Sep 2012 - 2:59 PM
Focal Length:60mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/20sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Through the window
Username:xwang xwang
Uploaded:13 Dec 2012 - 2:04 PM
Tags:General, Triotones, Window
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Tibetan
Tibetan  2 England
13 Dec 2012 - 2:46 PM

Good framing through the window works just right, like the tones very well done, nice light, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2946 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 3:14 PM

Hi Jasmine, I hope you are using the very simple method for duo/tri/quad toning in CS5 and CS6! Mode>greyscale, and then Mode>duotone? Then select from the large drop down combinations, which are all customizable? Then mode>RGB when finished?

This is nice, but unfortunately its not straight!



Regards


Willie

xwang
xwang  531 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 4:04 PM

Thank you very much, Willie. I haven't really got into the very detail yet.
Yes, you told me once, but I didn't have any idea what kind of the photos were good for duotones, still haven't. And I don't see much duotones, i can't tell anything about it, so I left it..When Lynne converted my previous uploading and gave me the tutorial, I had a look again. I found that the drop list had trio and quad, but I didn't know how to put colour in. So, I gave a few blind clicks and found that the right square was the colour and left was the curve. There was also a "Preset custom" drop list with all the colour codes. I guess that they both work the same. Accidentally, I quite like the dropper's first landing, saved it and here it is..
Yes, I was also struggling to get the perspective right as well. i found that if I got the house right the window frame would be wrong, I couldn't get the diamond shape right, because I didn't shoot it in the straight way. The frame on the left and bottom were made with paint brush. The other sides were original.
Thank you very much again, Willie.

NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43500 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom105 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 5:42 PM

A beautifully crafted image, now with your new gained knowlede I will look forward to many more Duotone images GrinGrinGrin

Regards Nathan

LynneJoyce
LynneJoyce e2 Member 6LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 6:23 PM

Never mind the straightness, just look at how well you followed my tutorial and yes, Banehawl, that was exactly the method therein!

iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4211 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom129 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 6:34 PM

Interesting content about duo tones.
I can't help feeling that the choice of subject and composition of the image needs some attention.
The subject is probably the nearest statute as the other is hidden even more behind leaves. It's positioned ok in the frame created by the centre diamond but as it appears to be the main subject and is too small and lost somewhat by the leaves and other bits and pieces. The scenes through the other four outer panes are a distraction.
Framing by windows, arches, doorways etc can work well to guide the eye to a main subject or scene but for me this image does not work.
Sorry to be negative but subject and composition are in my view so important to a successful picture, be it in colour, duotone or painted in oils.
Ian

paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom874 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 6:52 PM

Doesn't actually look like a duotone to me. More a slightly warm mono conversion. Duotone normally needs to be a bit more dramatic for me and simply is the construction of an image using two or more tones that are not necessarily black and white.

Not keen on content, this time, Jas. The window leaded frame is much too intrusive for me.

Cant win them all.

Paul

banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2946 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 10:34 PM

Thanks Lynne, it used to be a pain but so much easier with the later Photoshop!


Willie

xwang
xwang  531 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2012 - 12:14 AM

Thanks Ian. You made your point. I don't mind being negative. as long as it's helpful...
Thank you Paul. It's triotones, not duotones, but I actually haven't worked it all out yet. There is black in it. I thought that duotone is any two colours. I feel that it's stronger than B&W.
Thank you Lynne again for your kind help and tutorial.
Thank you again, Willie.

Last Modified By xwang at 14 Dec 2012 - 12:17 AM
ugly
ugly e2 Member 6ugly vcard United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2012 - 7:01 AM

Very well seen and taken...
I do like the boarder effect from window lead trim..

Dave

lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 761 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2012 - 10:12 AM

Well composed

paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom874 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2012 - 11:30 AM

Yes, duo, three, same basic principle. The black does retain the contrast at end of the curve, but the other colors are less obvious I feel.

Paul

xwang
xwang  531 forum posts7 Constructive Critique Points
14 Dec 2012 - 8:02 PM

Ahh.. I understand now. Thank you very much, Paul. That's very expert's point. It helps me to understand further about how to use these tones...Very glad to know.
Jas.

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