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pamelajean (Critique Team)

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13 Jan 2007 - 11:14 PM

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Love the title, Martin, and it's a shame you missed off the top of the tower because its reflection is really good in that puddle. Although the pathway is a good lead-in, you needed to relinquish a bit of it to allow for the top of the tower. On the subject of the tower, it is a really interesting structure, how about getting in close for some detail some time? The only other thing to suggest with this picture is to crop off some of the top so that it looks as if you intentionally missed the tower, and the reflection will help the eye to fill it in, so to speak. Unfortunately, too, you lost your sky colour.

CTee

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14 Jan 2007 - 7:25 PM

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Hi Martin, did take this shot with the top cut off or is it a later crop?

If a crop, would be interesting to see if you could clone out the top of the actual tower to match the reflection of its top in the puddle. Could use Gary's tutorial to replace the sky, assuming you have some clouds!

Soom

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24 Jan 2007 - 9:25 PM

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Like this one with the top of the tower not on the tower but in the puddle instead!