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A cross track above and walking away from Elterwater in the Lakes. The picture straight from the camera. Not sure about cropping rock on the right and dark clouds top left. Let me know what you think.
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Camera:Nikon D40 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18 - 55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Track
Username:Macnet Macnet
Uploaded:21 Jun 2007 - 8:58 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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11thearlofmar
21 Jun 2007 - 9:07 PM

The path gives great depth. If you crop the rock you will lose some shadow from the tree and I don't think it's distracting. The dark clouds give the sky a bit extra. I would leave it as it is myself.

Alan

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glyndwr
glyndwr  766 forum posts Wales9 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2007 - 9:19 PM

Great composition.
Lovely colours and really good lead in,the mountains and sky also good.
I like the tree as it keeps the interest inside the frame.
Sorry,I think I would 'clone' out the rock.
Well done you should be proud.

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Macnet
Macnet  7
25 Jun 2007 - 1:59 PM

Thanks for the feed back and encouragement. I took out the rock but it left a blank area. The jury are out in that one...
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