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at traditional market on lok baintan villages

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D5000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Feb 2012 - 7:05 AM
Focal Length:18mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:+2/3
ISO:1250
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:transaction on boat
Username:yudhanh yudhanh
Uploaded:6 Mar 2012 - 5:43 AM
Tags:Boat, Buyer, Seller, Traditional, Transport
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LynneJoyce
LynneJoyce e2 Member 6LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom99 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2012 - 6:25 AM

How fortunate for you that the position of the boats makes such a wonderful composition. Lovely image.

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yudhanh
yudhanh e2 Member 2yudhanh vcard Indonesia
6 Mar 2012 - 9:37 AM


Quote: How fortunate for you that the position of the boats makes such a wonderful composition. Lovely image.

i stand on suspension bridge / rocker for shot this picture, hope you sometimes comes to this place on south borneo,

many thanks for visiting

best regards,

yudha nh

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8831 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2012 - 9:12 PM

You had a wonderful viewpoint from the bridge, Yudha, and the image just wouldn't be the same if taken from anywhere else.
I think your composition is well thought out. I like the colours and the action that is taking place.
Very nicely taken, no critique from me.
I also like the one of the single boat in your portfolio.
Welcome to EPZ.
Pamela.

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DRicherby
DRicherby e2 Member 6269 forum postsDRicherby vcard United Kingdom725 Constructive Critique Points
7 Mar 2012 - 12:42 AM

The natural composition is excellent, though it would be nice to have a tiny bit more space at the bottom, so the nearest boat didn't come quite so close to the edge of the frame. It doesn't need a lot -- another 20 or so pixels at this resolution would probably do it.

For me, the colours are just a bit too much, especially the greens. I'd turn down the saturation a little to make them look more natural. There's also the very strange effect of a green area in the water to the left of the left-most boat, and the same with the pink headscarf. Neither is a reflection because reflections are going to the right. I don't know what could have caused that, unless you added those colours yourself.

Dave.

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yudhanh
yudhanh e2 Member 2yudhanh vcard Indonesia
7 Mar 2012 - 1:05 AM

thanks all my great friends really support my in photography...

best,


yudhanh

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yudhanh e2 Member 2yudhanh vcard Indonesia
7 Mar 2012 - 1:28 AM


Quote: Lovely colours and composition - incidentally I must have been close to here in 1960 when I called into Balikpapan on a Shell Tanker.

Frank

very nice trap shipping frank

ynh,

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