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Well I looked at my photos from the class Shapes Hunt from the other day and couldn't find many without children on... they do get in the way when you're in a school Smile
This one is of part of the Trim Trail in the infant playground, heavily cropped due to aforesaid subjects. My first real attempt at an abstract so it'll be interesting to know what people think. And hold your horses - I've got a shot of part of the shelter for tomorrow's upload. I hope you can contain yourselves!
Thanks for your time and comments as always, much appreciated.
Rachel

Camera:Olympus D-380 Check out Olympus Image Space!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Trim Trail Abstract
Username:Rach1970 Rach1970
Uploaded:9 Oct 2008 - 7:37 PM
Tags:Abstract, General, Shadows, Specialist / abstract, Squares, Trim trail
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Love it!!

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9 Oct 2008 - 7:42 PM

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Rach1970
9 Oct 2008 - 7:42 PM
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Thanks Dan.

helenlinda
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9 Oct 2008 - 7:43 PM
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Well done Rach. Saw this and knew immediately it was yours!!!
Helen

Rach1970
9 Oct 2008 - 7:47 PM
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Ha ha, you recognised it then?! Smile

DOGSBODY
DOGSBODY (e2 Member)
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9 Oct 2008 - 8:05 PM
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Great colours, shapes and shadows. Andy

Rach1970
9 Oct 2008 - 8:07 PM
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Thanks Andy Smile

PeterBee
9 Oct 2008 - 8:09 PM
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Great colour & texture.

Peter

Rach1970
9 Oct 2008 - 8:12 PM
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Thank you Peter.

AnneWorner
AnneWorner (e2 Member)
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576 forum postsAnneWorner vcard United States39 Constructive Critique Points
9 Oct 2008 - 9:40 PM
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The diagonals of the shadows is what makes this stand out. Well seen.
Anne

mikbee
mikbee (e2 Member)
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mikbee vcard Scotland3 Constructive Critique Points
9 Oct 2008 - 11:16 PM
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A well spotted detail here.Colour,lines and shadows too !!!
Good spot.
Mick.

woolybill1
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woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom57 Constructive Critique Points
9 Oct 2008 - 11:52 PM
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For me this is all about the tension between the objects leaning one way and their shadows leaning the other and, as Anne says, the diagonals make the image stand out.

I've attempted a very quick mono conversion simply because by removing the colour the shapes and contrasts are forced to work together! If anything I could have darkened the shadows a little more.

Best wishes,
Bill

Frase
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12 Oct 2008 - 9:06 PM
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I like it , super image.
Don

Rach1970
13 Oct 2008 - 7:50 PM
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Thanks all for your generous comments. Thank you too to Woolybill for the mod, it works well I reckon.
Rachel

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