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This is about as near to Wildlife as I'm ever likely to upload. Well everyone wants pictures of birds sitting on sticks, so I was pleased to find two for the price of one, perched in my French friends' dining room. And guaranteed to sit still for me, too.
There is apparently a rule that says you must focus on the eye or be forever damned. This is difficult when your birds don't have any eyes. I focused on the beak instead.
Thanks for looking,
Moira

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:16.0-85.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:10 Mar 2012 - 9:40 AM
Focal Length:34mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.6
Aperture:f/4.5
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
Exposure Comp:-1/3
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Return detected
Title:Two birds on a stick
Username:mrswoolybill mrswoolybill
Uploaded:15 Apr 2012 - 8:16 AM
Tags:Humour / fun, Silly sunday, Specialist / abstract, Wildlife / nature
Votes:53
Variant - TestsVariant - Tests

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pascalg
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15 Apr 2012 - 8:22 AM
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les deux pigeonsla Fontaine :

Deux Pigeons s'aimaient d'amour tendre.
L'un d'eux s'ennuyant au logis
Fut assez fou pour entreprendre
Un voyage en lointain pays...

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mrswoolybill
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15 Apr 2012 - 8:25 AM
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La Fontaine! It must be forty odd years since I last came across that, but it obviously stuck. Isn't there a setting to music?
Moira

LynneJoyce
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15 Apr 2012 - 8:31 AM
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Wow, birds on sticks that prompt a serenade in French, how romantic is that? Well done for your venture into bird photography Moira. V2 for me.

jonwebber
15 Apr 2012 - 8:39 AM
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Nicely shot oops, photographed. My rusty French is lost after the second line, Pascal.
jon

bobsblues
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15 Apr 2012 - 8:44 AM
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Eye Eye thems to cracking birds Moira good textures and colour .
Rob

SlowSong
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15 Apr 2012 - 8:44 AM
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You're in danger of getting an EC for this Moira! Wink
Chris

CarolG
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15 Apr 2012 - 8:49 AM
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What a wonderful 'ornament', Moira, and such obliging little subjects Smile. V.2 gets my vote. Carol

mrswoolybill
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15 Apr 2012 - 9:04 AM
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Quote: Nicely shot oops, photographed.

I had refrained from that joke out of good taste...

Quote: You're in danger of getting an EC for this Moira! Wink

I think it's automatic isn't it? Or do I need a texture layer as well??
Cheers everyone, and a very Silly Sunday to you. I'm just waiting for one of the WatchTheBirdie Brigade to object to the Wildlife tag now...
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 15 Apr 2012 - 9:05 AM
sherlob
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15 Apr 2012 - 9:10 AM
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Well the birds are shot with a nice an d clean background - always a holy grail for wildlife togs. The images show the colours of the birds well, but i need to be critical on one point - you've used too shallow a DoF and as a consequence we can't see the all important detail in the tail feathers WinkWinkGrin

Seriously Moira - this with your write up made me smile. I do wonder though whether this would be better in mono with a little vignette added?

Regards

Adam

mrswoolybill
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15 Apr 2012 - 9:34 AM
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Quote: I do wonder though whether this would be better in mono with a little vignette added?

Forget it. You have no idea how long it took to get the background to tone with the birds - the walls are vivid marigold yellow/orange. (Very French... I'd get arrested if I did that.)

Quote: but i need to be critical on one point - you've used too shallow a DoF and as a consequence we can't see the all important detail in the tail feathers

Damn. Actually I needed a fast shutter speed because I was hiding in camouflage gear behind the dining table in the hope that they would take off and I could get the wing feathers nicely fanned.
And now I think I need to get serious and look at what's been happening elsewhere here...
Moira

SUE118
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15 Apr 2012 - 9:48 AM
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Made me chuckleSmileSmile

NDODS
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15 Apr 2012 - 9:51 AM
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I love this image for all the right 'doves'.

Regards Nathan

Scottishlandscapes
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15 Apr 2012 - 10:00 AM
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It would be a great shame to loose the sheen colours on these lovebirds Moira, tremendous and just shows that a street photographer can do wildlife when she puts her mind to it.

Dougie

sherlob
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15 Apr 2012 - 10:39 AM
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Language please Moira - it is a Sunday! WinkGrin

saltireblue
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15 Apr 2012 - 10:56 AM
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I fail to comprehend how you can tag this 'wildlife', Moira. They are, after all, captive domesticated pets, and you have obviously cloned out their gilded cage in order to give the impression of being taken outdoors witha very long lens at f2.8 giving that very oof bg.
We are not taken in.Tongue

How very sillyGrin

Malc

P.S. Have you prepared the thank you post for when the EC/HC/POTW arrives?

mrswoolybill
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15 Apr 2012 - 10:59 AM
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Maybe if I added the Pets tag?

Quote: P.S. Have you prepared the thank you post for when the EC/HC/POTW arrives?

I think it may take the form of a link to an Oscar-style acceptance speech.
Moira

Herge88
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:09 AM
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Very amusing Moira, and as for rules suggesting you focus on the eye, well the day either you or Bill follow conventional wisdom is the day we will all be damned. Version two for me here a find it a slightly more pleasing angle.

Best Matt

franken
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:12 AM
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Very nice Moira, I like the composition in version 2.

Ken

mrswoolybill
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:18 AM
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At last there are mentions of V2! It's growing on me, I think I should have reversed the order...
Quite seriously, I have observed the discussion of bird photography on this site and find the criteria quite extraordinary. A while a go I read a comment criticising the photographer for not cloning out the seed that had lured the bird to a perch. It ended with 'We all know the rules...'
Moira

saltireblue
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:28 AM
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Quote: I think it may take the form of a link to an Oscar-style acceptance speech.
Moira

Speaking of rules....don't forget that 'Darlings' must be pronounced 'Dahlings', and a little tip: in the list of people you feel compelled to thank, never mention your agent, as he will demand an extra 3% for that.Wink

Last Modified By saltireblue at 15 Apr 2012 - 11:28 AM
Rende
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:28 AM
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Lovely colours and composition Moira, and I really enjoyed your write up Smile And I like V2 at least as much as V1.
Rende

Joline
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:55 AM
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I am in favor of V2....there is something even more coquettish about it.
I shall have to introduce them to my "Cooking Goose" posted awhile back.

You deserve 10/10 for your sense of humour. Good for you Moira

Daisymaye
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15 Apr 2012 - 2:48 PM
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Very lovely ornamental birds. Love the very sharp little beaks, good job Moira. Also like V2 of course. Love all the comments............Sandy

AnnChown
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15 Apr 2012 - 3:08 PM
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I prefer v1 - great work Moira to rid them of that background.
Ann

lifesnapper
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15 Apr 2012 - 3:20 PM
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Have 30 on me Moira. I like these characters, and I think you where right to lead with your first choice.

John Smile

ChiliMan
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15 Apr 2012 - 3:35 PM
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LOL...excellent write-up and even excellenter (hey, artistic licence) comments GrinGrinGrin

Moira, I have to say I prefer V1. 'Cos if the eyes don't have it, the beaks should. Not that I'm into beaks or anything...I'm not some kind of freak...no matter what you've heard...*nervous laughter and eyes darting about*

Andrew

TrevBatWCC
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15 Apr 2012 - 3:49 PM
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A great variation of birds on a stick! And a super Silly Sunday shot! Wink I'm biased towards V2 as my fave Smile
Trev Smile

Brilane
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15 Apr 2012 - 4:20 PM
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Interesting texture pictures.
Brian

RockArea
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15 Apr 2012 - 5:55 PM
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A wonderfully amusing read, Moira. It's V1 for me though, V2's far too avant garde for wildlife.

David

Richsr
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15 Apr 2012 - 6:06 PM
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have got to here I am exhausted have read on the comment, some fun one too.
Well photographed post processed and replied too Moria
Regards Richard

gingerdelight
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15 Apr 2012 - 6:58 PM
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I love these two images, such wonderful colours and the focus is perfect!
Carol

twelvemegs
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15 Apr 2012 - 7:17 PM
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You’ve had some fun out of these two images Moira.
I like the angle of V2.

David

LexEquine
15 Apr 2012 - 7:55 PM
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'Wonderful DOF, Tones, color, details, textures, & Compo,' Moira, on both Images, with v1 'getting the nod,' Today~~ Smile

~ Peter

pluckyfilly
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15 Apr 2012 - 8:05 PM
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V2 for me, I am lost for words having read all the above but as a silly Sunday image its certainly fun Smile

pdcche
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15 Apr 2012 - 9:12 PM
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Had to chuckle Moira but 2 good images.. Peter

nonur
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15 Apr 2012 - 9:54 PM
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Nice fun over good captures with nice colours, great background work and focus on the beaks. V1 is my favourite, but I like the framing of V2.

mikbee
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:05 PM
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I would have had a long wait Moira,waiting on these two feeding from my neighbours bird feeder I uploaded recently !!
And I have waited a long time to see such a good looking ''rusty stick'' !!
Mick.

AnneWorner
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16 Apr 2012 - 1:39 PM
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I like the patina of these - metal? Also like the focus on the beak, but I want v2. Smile

Anne

mrswoolybill
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16 Apr 2012 - 4:51 PM
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They're stone, Anne - but I've no idea what sort!
Moira

annettep38
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17 Apr 2012 - 7:53 PM
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Well they certainly cheap on peanuts... Great you got into stone birds Smile

Glostopcat
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20 Apr 2012 - 8:46 PM
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What a fine looking pair they are, the best looking birds on a stick i've seen on here in an age!Tongue

brownsilent
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25 Apr 2012 - 3:01 PM
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So to say, sticky birds... Smile
Nice detail captured, like all those colour shades,
Johanna

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