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Alea from China

She did some 'Wedding' modelling for me in sunny Bradford

A very pretty and tall model and hope to do some more work with her soon

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-135mm f/3.5-5.6 G
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Oct 2011 - 10:21 AM
Focal Length:58mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.1
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Fired, Return detected
White Balance:Auto
Title:Two for the price of one !
Username:AndyWUK AndyWUK
Uploaded:15 Oct 2013 - 11:25 AM
Tags:Portraits / people, Portraits / people / faces
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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
15 Oct 2013 - 6:28 PM

Decent shot but she comes over as looking, very much, at someone else. As if you grabbed a shot while she posed for someone on the left. The fkash has been well handled with no reflections. The face in the mirror appears slightly sharper than the real face. A problem with shooting with mirrors and depth of field.

This close, with flash, I wonder if your gun would handle f11. Possibly only if an external gun, but if you are considering photographing weddings, you must have an external gun. Preferably 2. One as back up.

I would never attempt a wedding without two camera bodies, two external flash units with diffusers and a good solid tripod.

Paul

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