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Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:50mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Ula in my heart..
Username:Basile Basile
Uploaded:22 Jan 2009 - 9:40 AM
Tags:Portraits / people, Tirard basile england 2008
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johnnyboy114
johnnyboy114 e2 Member 6231 forum postsjohnnyboy114 vcard United Kingdom106 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2009 - 10:03 AM

Love this.....

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wasper
wasper e2 Member 8532 forum postswasper vcard Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2009 - 10:19 AM

I love the the idea, the only problem I think is the shadows behind the hands. Pershaps a lighting adjustment might fix it.

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seanslevin
seanslevin e2 Member 10seanslevin vcard Ireland
22 Jan 2009 - 10:43 AM

Welcome Tirard , this is beautiful .
Sean

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stefedesign
22 Jan 2009 - 10:46 AM

beautiful photo, nice colour (just a bit) like the dof........
Steve

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andihun65
andihun65 e2 Member 5andihun65 vcard
22 Jan 2009 - 10:53 AM

Nice idea and well taken. Great use of DOF.
Andrew

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timbo
timbo e2 Member 12592 forum poststimbo vcard United Kingdom
22 Jan 2009 - 11:20 AM

excellent

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thetriguy
thetriguy e2 Member 10thetriguy vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2009 - 11:45 AM

Yes, the colors and feel are just super.
Best, Bill

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graceland
graceland  102378 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2009 - 3:19 PM

i just like it

super

well done

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LucyJClarke
LucyJClarke e2 Member 7LucyJClarke vcard United Kingdom
22 Jan 2009 - 8:19 PM

This is a really nice shot, great work.

Lucy.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
22 Jan 2009 - 9:34 PM

Welcome tp EPZ Basile.


Its a really nice shot, - you didnt provide any shot details, or your intent, or processing details, - if you can do this the next time it would be very helpful.

Its an engaging shot, - nicelt exposed. I would siggest a slightly cloer crop taking space from the left, - and in my mods Ive cropped to angle it a little.

First mod is the crop with some colour changes, - a little more eye detail, and the second is just a softened monotone which I think works well also.


Regards


Willie

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knackeredoldman
knackeredoldman e2 Member 5120 forum postsknackeredoldman vcard United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
23 Jan 2009 - 4:34 AM

gorgeous photo, very engaging as already said. I love the DoF, vignetting and textures, great processing.

Is she drinking her own blood?

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stefedesign
23 Jan 2009 - 11:22 AM

dof........depth of focus....... profonditÓ di fuoco
bella fotografia

Steve

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Livia
Livia e2 Member 5Livia vcard United Kingdom
26 Jan 2009 - 12:00 PM

Oh, I dont think she is drinking her own bloodSmile

I guess it is a tender gesture, and the fact that it is expressed on her own palm and not on other person's palm actually increases the power of the message.

This is why I like this photo. Congratulations!

Livia

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Basile
Basile e2 Member 5Basile vcard France
26 Jan 2009 - 12:16 PM

Wink that's almost it

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User_Removed
26 Jan 2009 - 2:34 PM

superb!

Al.

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Philip_H
Philip_H e2 Member 2Philip_H vcard United Kingdom
11 Aug 2012 - 8:19 AM

Wonderful portrait.

P.

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