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I got two shots using a borrowed tripod before the lightc went completely, this was the best of the two and any feedback will be appreciated.

Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-135
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Under the bridge
Username:jholmes jholmes
Uploaded:6 Dec 2008 - 1:39 PM
Tags:Architecture, Bridges, Dusk, Landscape / travel
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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139497 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
6 Dec 2008 - 2:22 PM

This has the makings of a good abstract. Some cropping at the right and bottom of the photo, plus a bit of brightening up, could enhance the impact. I've uploaded a mod for you.

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teocali e2 Member 6235 forum poststeocali vcard England18 Constructive Critique Points
6 Dec 2008 - 3:18 PM

Well observed and captured - this jumped out at me from amongst the thumbnails and the mod by Carabosse makes it even more eye-catching. Lovely colours and detail.
Sylvia

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pamelajean Critique Team 8774 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1605 Constructive Critique Points
6 Dec 2008 - 6:55 PM

I have been looking at this for some time, working out the structure of the bridge, understanding the angle from which you took the image, and this is good, it keeps the viewer's attention. The lines, shapes and colours make a fascinating abstract, and my immediate impression was that it was like some alien world or structure. Two shots are better than none, well done on capturing this one.

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jholmes
jholmes  6 Ireland
7 Dec 2008 - 10:37 AM

Thanks for the feeback it is very much appreciated.

Carabosse, thanks for mods, I will try and replicated on the original and Pamerlajean, if you consider the structure to be an upside down suspension bridge you are not far of the mark.

Lastly, its a creat wallpaper on my laptop and sometimes gets more attention than presentations !!!

John

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