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i shoot this at the middle of the night. there was not enough light. just a street lamp that make this image yellowish. so i turn in to BW. because i didn't like the colors the street lamp gave.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:20 May 2012 - 12:33 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/1.8
Shutter Speed:1/40sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Untitled
Username:adentenur adentenur
Uploaded:22 May 2012 - 3:41 AM
Tags:Black & white, Portraits / people
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cats_123 e2 Member 103958 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
22 May 2012 - 1:43 PM

like the subject matter...have had a go at a mod, trying to bring out the highlights. Hope you like it Smile

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adentenur
adentenur  2 Indonesia
22 May 2012 - 7:36 PM

thx for the mod!
i love how you bring out the highlight, now i know what missing in my image. Smile
thx.

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Jestertheclown
22 May 2012 - 9:26 PM

I like this and the mod. certainly works.
Personally, I'd crop a bit from the bottom too.

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adentenur
adentenur  2 Indonesia
23 May 2012 - 3:03 AM

thx jester
ow, i think there are so much foreground, right?

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Jestertheclown
23 May 2012 - 7:51 AM


Quote: thx jester
ow, i think there are so much foreground, right?


I've taken another look think that it benefits from a bit of a crop all round.
So I've produced a mod. in which I've cropped it on three sides, added contrast via an 'S' curve and sharpened it.
You'd get a much better result than I have, if you applied that to your original.
Hope this helps.
Bren.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 23 May 2012 - 7:53 AM

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