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Taken during day, using OCF with low cost wireless transmitter. Not TTL just on manual settings.

No PP other than slight adjustment to levels.

Title:Urban Shoot
Username:Mountainmac Mountainmac
Uploaded:11 Apr 2010 - 7:47 PM
Camera:5D Mark II
Lens:70-200 f4.0L IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Tags:Flash / lighting, Ocf, Portraits, Portraits / people, Urban shoot
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Sean_Dillon
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11 Apr 2010 - 7:54 PM

Looks a pretty good portrait to me, looks well lit.

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11 Apr 2010 - 8:24 PM

clicknimagine
11 Apr 2010 - 8:24 PM

the flash exposure is not bad to me, but the light appears to be harsh, because harsh shadow is visible from the wall behind your subject, you might have bounced the light from the ceiling( if it is close enough ) or some small paper or something else could have been wrapped over the light to diffuse it, as well as the subject placement could be changed to minimize the shadow,

i like the color of the dress, but not sure with the pose, she is looking uncomfortable to me,

although it is just a thought,
wish you best of luck for your future works...

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