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Britain and Ireland's next top model finalist Vanessa spent the day with me for my first "real" modelling shoot.

I would welcome constructive comments on my attempts to get into this field of photography.

Kindest Regards
Burnsie

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D4 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:50.0 mm f/1.4
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:26 Nov 2012 - 2:00 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.4
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Vanessa
Username:BURNSIE BURNSIE
Uploaded:28 Nov 2012 - 7:08 AM
Tags:Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43651 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom107 Constructive Critique Points
28 Nov 2012 - 9:27 AM

A very professional studio photograph, wonderful pose superb light.

Regards Nathan

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BURNSIE
BURNSIE e2 Member 625 forum postsBURNSIE vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
28 Nov 2012 - 10:01 AM

Many thanks Nathan.
Burnsie

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gaborfoto
gaborfoto  2 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
28 Nov 2012 - 11:56 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I think, you can't show me Vanessa's beauty...
Shooting from this angle with 50mm (using fullframe camera body), modify the rates (left foot vs. models face).
Pose: a little bit shy, without full feminity. For me, it's just a "Sit down, right foot down to the carpet etc".
Kepp your eyes on details - missing nail on the rigth arm's fingers.
The crop is too narrow above and bottom.
And the lights! Your lights did not excite - not for me. Your picture - from your lights settings - too flat.

Sorry for my wrong English, I just moved to the UK.

I wish you good lights, and try again - your model is beautiful and very pretty.

Last Modified By gaborfoto at 28 Nov 2012 - 11:56 AM

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BURNSIE
BURNSIE e2 Member 625 forum postsBURNSIE vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
28 Nov 2012 - 2:21 PM

Many thanks Gabor, lighting is an art that I am only at a starting point of any understanding and fully appreciate your point of view.
Regards
Burnsie

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