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A composite image on a musical theme with a close-up face shot and a section of manuscript.

Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:Sigma 28-300mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Voice
Username:photoshop_org_uk photoshop_org_uk
Uploaded:4 Oct 2008 - 9:54 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Lips, Mouth, Music, Musical, Notes, Photo journalism, Portraits / people, Sceam, Shout, Sing, Singing, Vocal, Voice
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blackforce
6 Oct 2008 - 2:26 PM

I like the colours, blend in well.

I think however it would have been better with Moist lips.

Lips look a bit dry and I find it distracting.

Also the blending of the face and the music paper is a bit harsh.

Just my thoughts Smile

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Eviscera e2 Member 81102 forum postsEviscera vcard United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2008 - 11:01 PM

a note from her mouth , to the script would unite the two halves , but its not there , your great at layers so a unifiying thing , instrument , note or even texture would be good .

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