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photo from the louvre in paris

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:14 Oct 2011 - 6:50 PM
Focal Length:12mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/8sec
Exposure Comp:+4/3
ISO:500
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:walking red
Username:meenaghans meenaghans
Uploaded:27 Nov 2011 - 1:16 PM
Tags:Effect, Lamp post, Louvre, Paris, Portraits / people, Red, Walking
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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61583 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom574 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2011 - 6:24 PM

Hello,
there is an awfull lot of atmoshpere here and the subject with the intrigueing figure is actually rather interesting but there are issues which prevent it from being the best image it could be.

the mysterious figure is merging with the shadows, the unusual flare over the streetlamp is fighting for attention and the red overall colour is not working forme, may work for others but im struggling with it and the whole lot of artifacts in the red sky. it looks like it was taken at vast iso in total darkness.

now im all for creativity and credit to you for that, because there is quite a bit about the shot i like, but the processing may well have been done better in a variety of ways.

under normal circumstances i would have suggested how to do alternatives, but the lack of data, the fact that i dont have access to the raw file would make that quite difficult without having a strarting point.

can i please suggest that if you request critique in the CG that you provide as much information as possible so the team can offer help in the right directions

regards
Phil

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meenaghans
27 Nov 2011 - 7:04 PM

thanks for the info i will upload the original photo tomorrow as this one is done using retaculation filter in photoshop

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2011 - 7:19 PM

Stephen, is this a photo of a photo? Or a street shot?


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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2011 - 7:30 PM

Tried a mod. Can you provide the info Phil asked for also, - and what you intended when you applied a heavy red toning?


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meenaghans
27 Nov 2011 - 8:01 PM

it is a street shot cropd from a bigger hdr photo i will upload it tomorrow i was just trying random effects in photoshop then

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2011 - 8:21 PM

OK, tks for the info


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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
29 Nov 2011 - 3:26 PM

I'm sorry. It's a try at something, but I must be getting old, can't really see what you were trying to achieve. Why would you want this result?

Paul

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