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taken at Bangor trying to practise

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:10 Mar 2012 - 2:52 PM
Focal Length:24mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.9
Aperture:f/5.0
Shutter Speed:1/1250sec
Exposure Comp:0.120297
ISO:500
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:water brollies
Username:williamsloan williamsloan
Uploaded:12 Mar 2012 - 11:30 AM
Tags:Humour / fun
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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom879 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 12:08 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Perfectly good record. To get the best from such as this you need to get in closer and fill the frame with backlit water - thus getting some twinkle and impact.

paul

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moglen  81 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 12:22 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I'd crop it in alot more. get close, perhaps use your flash to add a twinkle to the shot. go back on a sunny day you'll see all the diference.

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williamsloan e2 Member 4williamsloan vcard Northern Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 12:41 PM

many thanks billy

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Fefe e2 Member 3Fefe vcard United Kingdom30 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 12:49 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I have done a mod for you. I cropped of the bg as much as possible and gave it more saturation and contrast, also a sharpen. Didn't remove any noise as this took out all the detail in the water making it appear smooth.
Diane

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mhfore  7 England176 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 12:55 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Billy,

I think a tighter crop would work better but I would leave all three water features in. I have altered the exposure selectively and sharpened a touch. Billy who took this for you? I didn't have to level it Wink

Take care

Martin

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williamsloan e2 Member 4williamsloan vcard Northern Ireland1 Constructive Critique Points
12 Mar 2012 - 1:54 PM

thanks fefe and martin it shows i have been taking your advice

Billy

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