Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

Webbed

Gallery > Webbed

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

Add Comment

Taken on a very frosty day !

Camera:Fuji finepix fd40
Lens:none
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Webbed
Username:rocking_roxxy rocking_roxxy
Uploaded:2 Dec 2008 - 12:05 PM
Tags:Close, Close-up / macro, Cold, Frost, Ice, Macro, Night, Spider, Twilight, Up, Web
VS Mode Rating 100 (0% won)
These stats show the percentage of wins and the rating score that your photo has achieved. You can go to the VS Mode by clicking on this icon.

Signup to e2

Signup to e2 to see which photo this has won or lost against in the vs mode
Votes:Voting Disabled
Critque wantedCritique Wanted
Has Modifications Modifications Welcome (Upload a Modification)
Awards have been disabled on this photo

Comments

digicammad
digicammad (e2 Member)
9
21914 forum postsdigicammad vcard United Kingdom37 Constructive Critique Points
2 Dec 2008 - 12:42 PM
0

I really like this, it's unusual to have a frosty web silhouette and it works well. The only thing I can see which may improve it is to play with some alternate crops at the bottom. Try reducing the depth of the buildings by about half.

Ian

Constructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique!
Sponsored Links
Sponsored Links
2 Dec 2008 - 12:45 PM

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

Thanks very much Grin

Mynett
4
137 forum posts United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
2 Dec 2008 - 1:19 PM
0

interesting shot like the way it is shot upwards but the foreground is perhaps too heavy and would benefit with croping??
Linda

Constructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique!

thanks for the suggestion of cropping, but I kind of like the black of the buildings Smile

SlowSong
SlowSong (e2 Member)
4
3080 forum postsSlowSong vcard England28 Constructive Critique Points
2 Dec 2008 - 2:49 PM
0

Terrific broken web. I love the blue and the shapes the buildings make.
Chris

arhb
arhb (e2 Member)
5
1571 forum postsarhb vcard United Kingdom63 Constructive Critique Points
2 Dec 2008 - 5:57 PM
0

I kept looking at this image with interest.
I wanted to enhance the silouetted web, and wanted to reduce the noise in the sky, which is why I used the radial gradient, as a moon I suppose, and positioned ithe brightest part behind the centre of the web.
This turned the image into almost black and white, so I switched it to mono, giving the mod I uploaded.

pamelajean
pamelajean (Critique Team)
7
537 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1292 Constructive Critique Points
2 Dec 2008 - 6:03 PM
0

Hello, Rachel. This is a great spider's web abstract on a perfect plain background that has a nice gradient throughout the blue colouring. The centre of the web is nicely offset with sweeping curves that are so attractive. I think there is a bit too much of the bottom dark area/houses, but they do make a strong silhouette. I find the image quite dark and feel the colour needs enhancing, but this could be almost any colour of your choice. In my first modification, I made a slight crop to the bottom, lightened the picture and lightened the shadows so that the web over the houses was visible. I did a curves adjustment to strengthen the colours and graduation and to give it depth. I used noise removal and then sharpened. My other mods are a bit of fun with different hues.
Pamela.

Wow thanks for all the positive comments Smile And I msut say I like the black and white mod Smile

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.