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In front my home there is a big house, inside live almost 20 people, all family with not a good conditions in privacy, intimacy, when one of the teenage (boy or girl) get a child they go to live there.

When i saw the clouds, i wonder myself, oh my i guess inside will have mixed communications, interactions, a big storm inside but i don't know, so whats happening inside the "big" box, when the bigger "sphere" is moving around the sun.

I hope you suggest me or make some comments i will appreciate very much.

Brand:Samsung
Camera:Samsung ST600 Check out Samsung NX Generation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:12 Mar 2012 - 5:10 PM
Focal Length:4.9mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/8.9
Shutter Speed:1/1000sec
Exposure Comp:0.063125
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Whats going on inside the little box?
Username:vzuniga vzuniga
Uploaded:16 Mar 2012 - 11:34 PM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel
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devlin
devlin  4651 forum posts India39 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2012 - 8:47 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Victor,

Welcome to EPZ Smile and the critique gallery, and thanks for the description on your upload, it helps to understand what you were trying to achieve. Keeping in mind your desired intent, i feel the image doesnt convey the story as you would wish it and this is solely down to the way the shot has been composed. The house or box as you put it which is key to the message you were trying to convey needs to be more prominent than it is right now, basically the eye gets drawn to the sky which takes up a large part of your image with the power lines second and then finally the house. For this to work effectively try and visualize a composition which places emphasis on the house and the sky equally, and this can be achieved by changing the point of view, get closer to the house capturing it in its entirety with the sky looming up behind it, go for a lower perspective and try and place the house a little off center and avoiding the power lines.

Cheers and hope this helps

Prabh

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2779 Constructive Critique Points
17 Mar 2012 - 1:21 PM

You have very good feedback from Prabh, and welcome, enjoy the site.



regards


Willie

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vzuniga
vzuniga  2 Mexico
17 Mar 2012 - 5:26 PM

Prabh and Willie, thank you for your comments i really appreciate and Prabh i will follow your advice Grin

Regards
Victor

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Jestertheclown
17 Mar 2012 - 9:42 PM

Hi Victor,

Welcome from me too.

Some very good advice tghere from Prabh.

Cheers,

Bren.

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vzuniga
vzuniga  2 Mexico
19 Mar 2012 - 6:06 AM

Thank Bren yeah, that's good 'cause honestly it really helps me alot with the composition.

Regards
Victor

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2012 - 5:40 PM

Yes, to do what you wanted you needed all the house in the frame and the cables cloned out.

paul

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vzuniga
vzuniga  2 Mexico
1 Apr 2012 - 4:58 AM

Thank you Paul i will start to upload new more pics i shot with all your suggestions

Victor

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