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A image of two young people at a friend's party. Just playing with crops and mondo any adivice is welcome.

Title:Which Works?
Username:minicooper minicooper
Uploaded:16 Nov 2008 - 10:10 AM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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gary_d
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16 Nov 2008 - 11:08 AM
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I prefer v1. - gary

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I think its a great photo! Have uploaded a mod for you!
If you had brought the subjects a little further forward, the curtains would be a little softer as a backdrop – I softened these a little in the mod to show how it would look – also if you had a small hand held flash gun you could have bounced your flash of of the ceiling this would have softened the shadows around the head area but all that said its still a lovely portrait well done!

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banehawi
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523 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2132 Constructive Critique Points
16 Nov 2008 - 5:02 PM
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I like the monotone version, but I dont like the frame, - its too heavy and distracting. Would suggest a simple frame as in the mod.


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chuckspics
16 Nov 2008 - 6:37 PM
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tried to resize the green but hope you like the mods, Chuck

kiddsta1
29 Nov 2008 - 2:20 PM
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I like V1 and V3 great shot

Paul

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