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... and Whippy Whappy was the Abbey, or at least that's what my kids called them when they were 'knee-high to grasshoppers'. This is the East Pier (I hope) looking back to St Mary's Church. There wasn't much room between this edifice and the end of the pier so I've had to correct a fair amount of vertical distortion. I've also used a bit of 'fill light' when processing the Raw file to bring out the texture and colour of the stonework which was a bit dark against the sky. The resultant tonal range looked as though it would convert well to mono, which I did, and was going to upload as v1 (but 'bottled' it and led with the colour Sad).

Apologies for mostly clicks yesterday, spent the day as a muggle at the Harry Potter Studio Tour, Watford.

Dave

Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:EF-S15-85mm f/3.5-5.6 IS USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Whippy!
Username:WhiteRose1 WhiteRose1
Uploaded:24 Apr 2012 - 7:01 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Pier, Seaside, Whitby
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canonfan
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24 Apr 2012 - 7:02 AM
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Well captured. Nice shot
Jim

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CarolG
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24 Apr 2012 - 7:08 AM
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An excellent pov, Dave, V.1 gets my vote. Carol

Rock
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24 Apr 2012 - 7:19 AM
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Both versions are first class.

Rock

andylea
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24 Apr 2012 - 7:25 AM
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briliant detail dave wonderful colours and textures love the pov v1 for me today a cracker nice one Wink
andy

franken
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24 Apr 2012 - 7:29 AM
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Version one for me today.

Ken

marktc
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24 Apr 2012 - 7:36 AM
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Both versions are great, but V1 enhances the detail. A wonderful image Dave

paskinmj
24 Apr 2012 - 7:43 AM
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Great images captured. V2 is my preferred choice.
Matt

Rolepics
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24 Apr 2012 - 8:02 AM
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That is such a lovely sky and great pov, V1 with the colour wins for me - Carole

phil99
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24 Apr 2012 - 8:21 AM
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Super detail and colours .So colour ver. For me also....Phil

PaulLiley
24 Apr 2012 - 8:22 AM
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Good texture in that stonework so nice bit of processing there Dave. V1 for me this time. Paul

Last Modified By PaulLiley at 24 Apr 2012 - 8:22 AM
jonwebber
24 Apr 2012 - 8:43 AM
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Very well composed.
jon

ljh
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24 Apr 2012 - 8:47 AM
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I like V1 best.

Lucien.

alsoppdigitalart
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24 Apr 2012 - 8:50 AM
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Both good both well captured, plus good info . enjoyed it.

John

NDODS
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24 Apr 2012 - 9:11 AM
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Version number one ticks all the right boxes for me, and I can almost smell the 'Fish and Chips' from here. Great image.

Regards NathanGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

woolybill1
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24 Apr 2012 - 9:27 AM
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This succeeds on several levels including that of self-preservation! So easy at that precise spot to look up and fall backwards.
Your work on perspective and tones/textures has worked fine; the sky is good too. What I like most is the composition, with the like of the pier curving gracefully round and linking seamlessly with the steep path leading up to Henrietta Street. But I can't decide between colour and mono.
Bill

Cor
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24 Apr 2012 - 9:28 AM
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V1 for me . So well taken *****
Cor

V2 like the mono

Alf85
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24 Apr 2012 - 9:54 AM
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Super image, love it both colour and mono.
Alf.

almiles
24 Apr 2012 - 9:59 AM
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Mono works for me, the sky is really enhanced. Great viewpoint; I'd be tempted to crop as a 7x5 so as to lose the slightly distracting concrete block at the bottom left corner and allow the pier to be more effective as a leading line. Smile

Al

WesternRed
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24 Apr 2012 - 10:07 AM
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To me Dave you are tops in point of view. My choice in V1 V2 well no choice as you really should not be choosing Between B&W. Grin Well done lad. WesternRed.

saeidNL
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24 Apr 2012 - 10:37 AM
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Two Fantastic and great capture,V1 is my favorite,
saeid

xwang
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24 Apr 2012 - 11:10 AM
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I'm not sure V1 or V2 actually. I always like the colour you produced, I think that it's your advantage. So, I might go for V1. I just thought if extended canvas would help to keep a bit of sky and free transform would keep it as some kind of shape that you like it to be...

xwang
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24 Apr 2012 - 11:12 AM
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BTW, being pickyWink, I just spotted a bit blue on the top...

Irishkate
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24 Apr 2012 - 11:29 AM
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Whippy Whappy! What a great name!
Think I prefer colour version with that gorgeous sky.
Lovely detail on bricks.
KateGrin

helenlinda
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24 Apr 2012 - 11:41 AM
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I think colour is my favourite here - a fine piece of work here Dave SmileSmile
Helen

Richsr
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24 Apr 2012 - 12:06 PM
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Got a nice sky and good tones in this Dave, going with the mono conversion as it shows the textures in the stone better and the back ground is less distracting too
regards Richard

TrevBatWCC
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24 Apr 2012 - 12:45 PM
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Yes, it's definitely the East Pier, Dave Wink A fine capture here looking back towards St Marys - like both versions, but the colour wins for me Smile
Trev Smile

ugly
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24 Apr 2012 - 1:15 PM
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V2 works best for me here...
Great work nice textures and detail...

Dave

Cliff1944
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24 Apr 2012 - 1:17 PM
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V1 for me.
Cliff

Alvar
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24 Apr 2012 - 1:27 PM
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Great shot Dave
Alvar

carper123
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24 Apr 2012 - 1:32 PM
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hi Dave, i really like both versions they each convey completely different interperatations of the capture and you have done a good job on the perspective. lots of detail in the stonework, windows and railings. As usual you have done your own critique which i really enjoy, well done.
Darryl

achieverswales
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24 Apr 2012 - 2:19 PM
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Like both versions Dave but colour is my preference today, excellent composition and tones.

Regards

Trev.

mikbee
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24 Apr 2012 - 3:09 PM
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I think you may guess what caught my eye here Dave ?
A good bit of rusty rail here.
Quite a rare sight as health and safety dictates nowadays to have them replaced,
so I suspect this fine bit of ''artwork'' days are numbered !!
Super shot.
Mick.

Last Modified By mikbee at 24 Apr 2012 - 3:11 PM
danbrann
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24 Apr 2012 - 3:14 PM
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Well worth the work and effort put into this one.

LexEquine
24 Apr 2012 - 3:14 PM
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Tough choice, today,...'But I like the v2, Monochrome Composition, slightly more than the color,' Dave~

Artistic composition & superb imaging qualities on both pictures~

Ciao~ Peter Smile

prabhusinha
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24 Apr 2012 - 3:44 PM
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V 1 is superb.

Lillian
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24 Apr 2012 - 3:50 PM
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Got to be the colour one as you certainly have captured so much detail Dave
great shot
Lillian

ChiliMan
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24 Apr 2012 - 4:12 PM
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Oh my.

Ok...the colour one is so beautiful for many reasons (the sky being a big one)...

...but the black and white is wwWOWww and completely wallworthy, Dave.

Andrew

gajewski
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24 Apr 2012 - 5:12 PM
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I really like both versions and would be hard pressed to choose between the two.

-=\Walter

AnnChown
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24 Apr 2012 - 5:17 PM
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Great composition Dave - I can't decide but have a slight preference for the mono!
Ann

nikshot
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24 Apr 2012 - 5:38 PM
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Love the composition and the POV, great shot.

Nick

zapar40
24 Apr 2012 - 5:44 PM
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always colour versions for me Dave, lovely scene well captured and nice sky to go with it.
nice one, ant.

Herge88
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24 Apr 2012 - 5:45 PM
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Great detail and textures in that stonework, I think I prefer the colour here.

Best Matt

hasslebladuk
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24 Apr 2012 - 6:44 PM
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Two excellent shots
mike

MalcolmS
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24 Apr 2012 - 6:50 PM
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V1 for me Dave, it needs the colour in the sky IMHO.

Malcolm

clintQB
24 Apr 2012 - 7:10 PM
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loving these coastal shots....great composition Grin

saltireblue
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24 Apr 2012 - 7:46 PM
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Good work on taking the pisa out of this structure, DaveWink The use of fill light has done its stuff, too. Congrats. on not falling off the end of the pier.
The meandering path leads us from the lighthouse to the distant cottages as a natural link.
In v2, may I suggest a tad more contrast and running a blue filter over it to dramatise the sky?

Malc

Last Modified By saltireblue at 24 Apr 2012 - 7:54 PM
Michaela_Solway
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24 Apr 2012 - 9:07 PM
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Great POV.. Great composition.. And V1 today for the colour.. Brings out more detail imho

pdcche
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24 Apr 2012 - 9:10 PM
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Lovely composition Dave, colour, detail, textures all great, V1 for me.. Peter

Tynnwrlluniau
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24 Apr 2012 - 9:31 PM
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Colour for me here too Dave. The sky loses a bit of its impact in the mono,
Alun

sweetpea62
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24 Apr 2012 - 10:20 PM
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Superb Dave,two excellent shots..Lin

ChristineD
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24 Apr 2012 - 10:58 PM
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Excellent images, coloured for my choice.
Thank you for your encouragement, it is appreciated.
Christine

annettep38
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25 Apr 2012 - 12:06 AM
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bottled it is right, looks like a gritty bottle of a harbour light.
for once I prefer v2, the grit shows best

Jocelia
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25 Apr 2012 - 3:28 AM
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A different and nice view of Whitby for a change.
Yes, I like your processing as it brings out the colours in the
stone work and the rusty rail….
Another excellent one………

Jocelia

BarbaraR
25 Apr 2012 - 12:34 PM
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Lovely shot Dave.
I like the colour best.
Very well composed and taken.

B.

imagio
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25 Apr 2012 - 3:32 PM
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I prefer the color one this time..

paulb20
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25 Apr 2012 - 6:50 PM
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I like both versions, Dave.
Paul

moiral
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25 Apr 2012 - 8:41 PM
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Very good shot and does convert well to mono Dave. Moira

derekhansen
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25 Apr 2012 - 9:54 PM
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I think the colour version works better here Dave. Well composed and you have balanced the exposure perfectly.
Derek

Very nice, colour version for me
Rick

queengu21
26 Apr 2012 - 7:45 AM
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Both versions are quite good but i prefer v1 that has a magical appeal
Ely

V2 for me, but both nice.
Wayne

fificat100
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26 Apr 2012 - 6:07 PM
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Superb p.o.v.and compo. Both versions are great with the mono taking the trick for me.

Lavina

Fefe
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26 Apr 2012 - 7:44 PM
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Great pov Dave! Dont think I have ever been to this side............ Colour for meGrinGrin
Diane

cassiecat
7 May 2012 - 1:08 PM
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like them both. kids imaginations are great Smile hope you enjoyed the studio tour.lesley

twelvemegs
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8 May 2012 - 7:05 PM
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This is a cracking view Dave.
I’m really liking the mono.

David

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