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Still playing with Lego, liking this a bit more, my original ones were shot using natural light, this however is shot with artificial light and i think it's better for it. Any thoughts or ideas will be gratefully recieved.

All C&CS welcome

Thanks for looking

Den

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Date Taken:11 Dec 2012 - 8:57 PM
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nonur
nonur e2 Member 5nonur vcard Turkey8 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2012 - 6:24 AM

I do like it!

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Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
12 Dec 2012 - 7:04 AM

My son used to love Lego when he was young - are you getting young again SmileGrinGrin
A great abstract look and really pleasing - threes works well !!

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bobsblues
bobsblues e2 Member 4bobsblues vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2012 - 7:14 AM

Coming along nicely there Den good abstract.Smile
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WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41034 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England134 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2012 - 7:40 AM

An interesting and well captured subject, Den. Does it work with more contrast?

Dave

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JohnChambersPhotography

Lego land is doing well I see, Den. good idea works well.

John

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lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2012 - 10:19 AM

The shadows are a master stroke

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PinkK
PinkK  580 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2012 - 11:05 AM

Great idea!

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maowillshootyou

Beautiful play with tones and perfectly composed.

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pamelajean Critique Team 8755 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1588 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2012 - 8:47 PM

I appreciate what you have been trying to achieve with the blocks, Den, and think this is the best so far.
The mono and artificial light bring out the strength of the shapes and shadows extremely well.
You obviously like precision. The 3-2-1 is a good idea, as is the slight diagonal of the display.
The perfect shadows are the only thing that I might change, if anything. By directing the light at an angle, your shadows could provide more interesting shapes on the surface, rather than just following the line of the 3-2-1 blocks. For me, this is just a little bit "stayed" and the different angle of the shadows would not only add more interest, but the image then becomes more artistic.
Another idea that springs to mind is a more random positioning of the blocks, as if a child has just dropped them on the floor. I know it isn't easy for everyone to do "random", and I find it difficult myself, but it might be worth the effort. You would just have to go for it and try not to re-position the blocks again and again, however tempting it may be. Try just dropping them, then dropping them again and again, and see what you feel about the results.
Pamela.

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paulcookphotography

This is pretty good!!

Love the minimalist/abstract aspects and the almost 'architectural' feeling that comes through

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