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i took this today using a new nikon 16 -85mm lens i bought,this was taken inside
a round thatched house ,what do you think

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:16-85mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Apr 2012 - 1:13 PM
Focal Length:19mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.7
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/15sec
Exposure Comp:-0.314250
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:wicker boat
Username:williamsloan williamsloan
Uploaded:15 Apr 2012 - 9:29 PM
Tags:General
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Irishkate
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15 Apr 2012 - 11:51 PM
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Personaly I love this image.It kinda makes a nice abstract with textures, and contrasting colours.
Well done.wonder what our experts have to say.
KateGrin

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16 Apr 2012 - 12:08 PM
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Good morning Billy,

Out and about with that new lens eh Wink.

I think this must be classed as a record shot, I'm sure someone will tell me if I'm using the wrong phrase Grin. As Frank has said this is a Coracle which have a history dating back thousands of years. They were originally covered with animal skins and still are in some countries.

I undersatand why you have left room to the right but in this instance I think it would work better in portriat. So a slight twist to your left would have captured it this way. On your D90 you have options for the flash, don't think it a full flash or nothing, just a small amount of fill-in flash may have helped to bring out the detail in the thatched ceiling, something to try sometime.

To show how a portrait image may have looked in the mod I have added some canvas to the left and cropped some off the right. Then to lighten the image slightly go into your blend modes, you know, the one where "Overlay, Soft Light, Hard light etc" and select "Screen" you can then reduce the opacity if it's to bright.

Billy you know where I am.

Take care
Martin

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paulbroad
16 Apr 2012 - 3:42 PM
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This is a perfectly good record as it stands, but needs a suitable title - it took me a while to figure out what I was looking at. There is nothing wrong with your composition for me - just needs brightening up a bit to give it some biter.

Paul

banehawi
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523 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2132 Constructive Critique Points
16 Apr 2012 - 4:22 PM
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Good work Billy, and it is a record shot, like something you might see portrayed in a Museum. Martins mod is a better representation of it. To give it scale, you would need a known sized object beside it, a person standing for example.

W

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