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moment of love.by-shahidullah
critique-focus,composition and expossure

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon Powershot SX20 IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Jun 2011 - 5:13 PM
Focal Length:100mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.7
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:200
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:wildlife/nature
Username:shydallah shydallah
Uploaded:9 Nov 2013 - 1:35 AM
Tags:Wildlife / nature, Wildlife/nature
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handlerstudio
handlerstudio e2 Member 2handlerstudio vcard United States5 Constructive Critique Points
9 Nov 2013 - 3:15 AM

Composition works, great color.....focus a little soft.

Peter

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shydallah
shydallah  4 Bangladesh
9 Nov 2013 - 12:33 PM

hi,peter,thanks for coment.the camera i used that was sx20 canon.picture soft focus.so changed that within short time.
best regards-shahidullah

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7404 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom987 Constructive Critique Points
9 Nov 2013 - 2:25 PM

The exposure is good, the colours are gorgeous. I've uploaded a Mod with a bit of Unsharp mask applied, and that white dot on the right removed.
I've had a look at a few online reviews of your camera and they all mention softness of focus, don't add to that in-camera! Check if your software will allow you to add some softness afterwards if you want to.
Moira

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom845 Constructive Critique Points
9 Nov 2013 - 4:11 PM

Are you saying you added soft focus? Really not a good idea with this type of image, it needs to be sharp. Very sharp. It is colourful and quite pleasant but I would prefer better resolution on the main insects. The best way is to be side on to them, above if the wings are spread.

Paul

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