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A triptych of photos taken this winter.

My first upload but I would welcome everyone's thoughts.

Camera:Sony alpha 700
Lens:KM AF DT 18-70
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Winter January 2010
Username:SimonAlpha700 SimonAlpha700
Uploaded:10 Jan 2010 - 7:13 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Steve012345
10 Jan 2010 - 7:18 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Nice photographs. I think the positions of 1 and 3 should be reversed as no. 1's fence line leads your eye out of the triptych.

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cats_123 e2 Member 103958 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jan 2010 - 7:19 PM

nicely composed and good clarity...not quite got the feeling of depth for me Smile

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Suehh e2 Member 739 forum postsSuehh vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jan 2010 - 7:29 PM

3 lovely wintry images and very nicely presented.

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David_Lamb
10 Jan 2010 - 7:34 PM

Great images and I would have to agree with SteveO regarding the fence. David

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cantona43
cantona43  8851 forum posts England4 Constructive Critique Points
10 Jan 2010 - 7:43 PM

I also agree with Steve, I present a lot of my work as triptychs and that is the way I do it let your outer frames direct the eye into the centrepiece, but in saying that a cracking first upload and I for one am looking forward to seeing more of your work
welcome
Neil

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SimonAlpha700
10 Jan 2010 - 9:57 PM

Thanks all. Very good advice about the fence line. I hadnt thought of that and will definately take that onboard.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom826 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jan 2010 - 2:35 PM

Nice to see and technically well done. Fence comment a must.

paul

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