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Winter Sun on Llandaff Cathedral

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Taken on one of clear days over the Christmas holiday, objective is to show the colours of the stone work.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 70D
Lens:18.0 - 250.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 28.4 - 394.2 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 Dec 2013 - 12:37 PM
Focal Length:63mm
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Winter Sun on Llandaff Cathedral
Username:Steven_Tyrer Steven_Tyrer
Uploaded:7 Jan 2014 - 11:11 PM
Tags:Architecture, Cathedral, Llandaff, Winter sun
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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jan 2014 - 9:26 AM

Decent effort, but most of the stonework is in shadow rather than the pleasant lighting. Wrong position or time of day to really emphasise the fabric of the building.

Paul

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chase Critique Team 81115 forum postschase vcard England234 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jan 2014 - 5:59 PM

To really get to your objective of showing the stonework I think you needed to be infront of the tree line which obscures most of said stone sadly.

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
8 Jan 2014 - 7:17 PM

I can see that the stonework is very attractive, Steve, especially its colours.
You have a very nice sky and the detailed outlines of the cathedral show up well against it.

The light is coming from the right side, only illuminating parts of your cathedral, and the left part is being shadowed by the tower on the right. I would therefore suggest trying on a day when the light is more favourable, choosing a different time of day, or changing your viewpoint.

However, if you can't return at a better time, you can try finding the best shooting position to make the most of the light that you have at the time. There is nothing wrong with shadows, they add dimension to an image, but you need to have the light hitting a bit more of the cathedral.

When changing position, you also need to consider if there might be a better vantage point that excludes a lot of the surrounding trees. Having chosen your subject, walk around it and look for these things before pressing the shutter button.

Another reason for the underexposure could be that you were shooting into the sky, which can cause the camera's metering system to underexpose your subject, because the camera sees a lot of brightness, and so your image needed to be exposed more. In a situation like this, it is common practice to use exposure compensation of +1 (or so) to anticipate what is going to happen.

An alternative, if you want to show off that stonework, is to get in a lot closer for some architectural shots, even some very close abstract-style images. Usually the first thought is to take a wide shot of the whole building, which is fine, but do more than that, also take some that home in on smaller details.

You have a very attractive subject here, with some unusual features. Decide what it is that strikes you as the most interesting features, such as the stonework, and think of how you can best capture those special features.

Pamela.

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