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A yacht at Aberdovey.

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix X10
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:25 Jun 2012 - 4:45 PM
Focal Length:18.7mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.0
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/240sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:"Yacht"
Username:Digby Digby
Uploaded:25 Nov 2012 - 5:49 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Landscape / travel, Photo journalism, Transport
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parob
parob e2 Member 4parob vcard France72 Constructive Critique Points
25 Nov 2012 - 6:08 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Certainly deserves looking at. I prefer the B & W conversion. Here, everything looks good, save for some details that burden the shot. It if were possible to erase the boats that cluster around the masts, one in the middle and the two others at the side. It is also difficult to explain the bright light just about the top of the middle boat. I am quite impressed by the immense low tide. The man on the pier, unfortunately hidden, give a sense of the proportions. The other thing is the sunlight coming from the left leaving a nasty shadow on the man in the yacht. I hate being so picky, it is simply because I like this shot and would like to see it improved to the maximum.
Paul

Last Modified By parob at 25 Nov 2012 - 6:10 PM

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Digby
Digby e2 Member 661 forum postsDigby vcard Wales
26 Nov 2012 - 12:39 AM

Have uploaded modified version with boats removed.

Hugh

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
26 Nov 2012 - 3:52 PM

Good work on the mod. The bright light at the top of the middle boat is from the side of the white houses. Cant see that hidden man on the pier Paul! Perhaps hes too well hidden.

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