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The Yellowstone River drops over two waterfalls in a few hundred yards. This is the smaller Upper Falls (109ft); downstream are the Lower Falls, which are a crazy 308ft high (twice the height of Niagara, though very much narrower), at the head of the Grand Canyon of the Yellowstone. The photo was taken from the trail to the top of the Lower Falls, which is a very steep third of a mile — the drop from the canyon rim is about 600ft — but well worth it for the spectacular views.

This was taken in early June, which is late spring in Yellowstone, so the rivers are swollen with melted snow from the mountains. The flow in spring is ten or twelve times what you'd see later in the year.

All comments and criticism welcome. It's deliberately dark but it does look excessively so on some monitors. Helen is hereby challenged to come up with an effective diagonal version. Wink

Dave.

Monday, 22nd June, 2009.
187mm, f/5.6, 1/800s, ISO-100.

Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:Canon 70-200mm f/4 L IS
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Yellowstone (II)
Username:DRicherby DRicherby
Uploaded:5 Aug 2009 - 1:40 PM
Tags:Black & white, Landscape / travel
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BillyGoatGruff
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188 forum postsBillyGoatGruff vcard England196 Constructive Critique Points
5 Aug 2009 - 1:47 PM
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A very dramatic and bold composition.
As you say, a tad dark, but I don't think that's really a problem with the bold graphic essentials.

Nicely done, David.

Cheers
Bill

Last Modified By BillyGoatGruff at 5 Aug 2009 - 1:47 PM
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James_C
5 Aug 2009 - 3:41 PM
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Very dramatic! that's some waterfall.

James

baclark
5 Aug 2009 - 3:59 PM
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Dramatic moody stuff, can hear the thundering of the falls.
Barbara

JOKEN
JOKEN (e2 Member)
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JOKEN vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
5 Aug 2009 - 6:01 PM
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A dramatic treatment of these lovely falls - a touch of Ansell Adams

ChasD
ChasD (e2 Member)
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ChasD vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
5 Aug 2009 - 6:50 PM
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A very bold and dramatic composition. I was about to write Ansell Adams but then I saw Joken has beaten me to it.

Charles.

teocali
teocali (e2 Member)
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71 forum poststeocali vcard England18 Constructive Critique Points
5 Aug 2009 - 7:22 PM
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A really powerful and dramatic image Dave - love the mono and bold contrasts and it doesn't look too dark on my monitor. As somebody has already said, you can almost hear the thundering of the falls and feel the misted spray!
Sylvia

DRicherby
5 Aug 2009 - 11:24 PM
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Well, if this reminds two of you of Adams, my work here is done. Smile Thank you both for the compliment.

riprap007
6 Aug 2009 - 11:02 AM
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awe inspiring sight!

Great work.

Warm wishes, Iain.

love it

well done.

Kool_Kat
15 Aug 2009 - 9:47 PM
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WOW how do you get pic to look like this ? super shot in B/W
Kath

DRicherby
16 Aug 2009 - 10:47 PM
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Kath, the glib answer is that I just fiddled with the controls until I got the look I wanted! But that doesn't help much. Smile

First off, the photograph itself. It was taken mid-afternoon, looking due north. The geotag shows you roughly where I was standing, somewhere near the lower falls — the upper falls are a few hundred yards upstream, at the point where the river curves from running approximately to the west to running south. (It's easier to see on the satellite view.) The canyon is dark rock, the trees are darkish pines; the sun was shining straight at the falls and the massive cloud of spray. The falls were obviously going to dominate the photograph, so it was essential that they not be blown out so the only option, short of attempting something with HDR, was to expose for the falls and hope the shadows weren't too dark. (This is a reasonable hope — dark shadows are `moody', while blown highlights on this would have been a hideous block of solid white.)

As you can see from the original version, which I've now uploaded, the result was a pretty dark photograph. The colours are drab so black and white was a no-brainer. As you can see, I rotated it a little, which resulted in a slight crop. I don't recall exactly what I did but, once the b/w conversion was done, the major part of the `feel' came from using the curves tool, mainly to make the falls more intense but also to lose even more detail from the shadows, while keeping enough there to hint at what's going on.

That got most of what I wanted, but there were still a few things to do. You'll notice that I've cloned out the out-of-focus branches from the lower right corner. I also did some minor dodging and burning. Most significant of that was to brighten the white water in the river, to make it stand out more. A few bright fallen treetrunks got darkened, too — especially the ones in the upper right corner; I fancy I should have maybe toned down some of those bright bare branches in the lower left, too.

I hope that was in some way helpful. Smile

edwood
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Scotland
30 Aug 2009 - 8:23 AM
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very strong mono image, got the tones spot on.

wow great shot nice
Dawn

hebdens
9 Sep 2009 - 8:00 PM
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Really like this Dave, has great atmosphere, you can almost feel the spray from where I'm sitting . The force of the flow is quite spectacular !
Tracy

alighalam
11 Dec 2009 - 2:33 PM
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Beautiful images, both colour and mono shots, strong composition.
Ali.

rossd
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1061 forum posts England
7 Feb 2010 - 9:07 AM
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Can't really add to what has already been said. I like 'the dark and moody' treatment better than the colour.

peppercorn
19 Feb 2010 - 2:18 PM
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Like this alot...
Bev

xwang
xwang (e2 Member)
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xwang vcard 4 Constructive Critique Points
23 Mar 2010 - 8:37 AM
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Excellent! Like the POV,prefer V1, which strengthens the waterfall.

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