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Path to Light
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Path to Light by PatrickSmith
We finally had some decent cloud cover in the afternoon, so I went to Mt. Diablo and climbed halfway up, to the 2,000 foot level to this place that I have been to many times before. (I only had to climb the last 1,000 feet..) I hoped that someday the light would be right to illuminate the center hill and trees against a darker background, and finally it all came together. This was my 6th attempt to get this shot. So that is 6,000 feet of climbing!
I have always enjoyed coming up here but the pictures I took never really conveyed how it feels to be up here away from everything. The winter rainy season has made everything green, and this will all be golden brown in a couple of months as the dry season appears to be starting now.
I live 5 miles away off the right side of this image.
The clouds really were dark like this in the original RAW image, but let me know whether or not you like them. I was just excited to actually get dark brooding clouds mixed with light. Are they too heavy?
1/8th second exposure @F16 with ND grad 0.9
| Date Added: | 26 Mar 2007 - 14:50 |
| Camera: | Canon 5D |
| Lens: | Canon 17-40L @19 |
| Film: | RAW ISO 50 |
| Categories: | Landscape / Travel General |
| Geo Data: | Show Map Position |
| Tags: | spring, san francisco, diablo |
| Readers' Votes: | 208 |

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Worth it, though. Great shot. I'll bet that would look great in IR, too.

Jeanie



Rgds
Paul
Excellent workmanship!
Jennnnn


OK...serious head on...the light on the tree to the right is fantastic...and that's where you should have been - unless there'd been a better foreground...one mole hill and a bit of rough grass to me isn't a great foreground, in fact it becomes the start of a better image when you crop it just below the crown of the rounded hill in the foreground.
I'm not overley keen on the unatural looking upper cloud but we'll leave that for another day.
I could just said - great - but the guilt would have haunted me forever, Patricko.
steve
I like it and that's all that matters isn't it?

Ade
Yes Conrad it was a bit of a walk!
Karen, Keith and Steve, it is a good critique. Yes the sky was very dark because some high clouds moved or the top of those clouds. But anything less than a 0.9 blew out the highlights. This is exactly the way the sky looked in the raw file. It was very dark.
And yes, I was down at that tree for quite a while, but the angle of the hills made it difficult to do much with it. I do have other shots that I made from there that I may post later as a comparison.
LOL - Keith.....thanks...
Good point Ade...he's just a rookie! ( running for cover....)
Patrick

Di

Richards? Daltrey???
Good shot!
Jouko
PS I´m not mad yet, but sad I am.....
LOL Ian, I thought I'd mix it up a bit with this one. I rarely get clouds suitable for 'painting with light' sorts of shots. And I have lots of other shots from here that I may upload later, we will see.
Patrick

I like the clouds also. It is what was there..
Edgar
Lisa

Ron
Rg Tony

Nigel
I know what you mean Edgar. That is why I had to come back so many times and I may go back a few more times.
That is what I was hoping for Lisa.
It is a great place to live Ron. The only problem is that the weather is 'too good' and I don't get many dramatic clouds like in the UK.
I like it too Tony.
Patrick




Dave
Thanks Dave. The high clouds moved over the lower ones and it was very dark in spots. I might have another go at processing the sky, though it looks like this in the raw file. But maybe I can soften it up a bit.
Anybody else think a softer sky will help?
Patrick
Scroll the shot up and lose the 'bruised' cloud and see what you think.


all the best
clint

Dave

Superb light & stunning scenery,those greens are very good,nice & clear,very much worth all that climbing!
janet
The sky is brooding and great plus the colours are verdant. Still much better a landscape than I ever catch
Hedgehog

Dennis (chamberlain), I know what you mean. And I have other ones that are different. Most EPZ'ers dont' realize that we only get a couple of months when things are this green and there are alss decent clouds in the sky. The pressure is on to get all the green grass shots with good light that I can!
Yes Kris and Dave, maybe the landscape version or a square crop of this might be the solution.
True Janet, I can experiment a lot here so I'll return at least a couple more times before it dries out and the clouds go away until November.
LOL Paul, you are genetically programmed for the drama of the sea so I 'see' your point! I do have a few good seascapes up my sleeve that you may like more.
Patrick


Steve!

I think the sky gives it some Drama,Diablo Mt,but i can't take my eyes off those hills as the light falls on them and i've just got to follow it and the perspective and lead in is amazing.I think it's a perfect contrast,spectacular view and atmosphere.Take care.Ann

Mark.




Sean
And no I haven't been out with the camera, lol.
;o)


Edmund (GlosTomcat), there are lots of great views, but the terrain is very steep and it is difficult to get unobstructed views.
LOL Steve, You've hurled! But I have other versions of this that will make you 'unhurl!' Actually I may make a square crop out of this.
Yes Mark, I was going for the top third to be sky. Usually I dont' care about the rule of thirds, as I usually go 60/40 or eve 50/50 on a lot of my shots if I get decent sky. Here, the camera was pointed downwared at about a 30 degree angle. It is steeper than it looks.
LOL Ian... Now would I ever suggest for you get off of your lazy something and go take a few shots? Me?
Patrick

A great shot.
John

Having said that, you finally have clouds, so you damn well made sure we saw them!!!
Martin
On the down side, I do think the cloud at the very top is un-natural looking and distracting, but overall I like the shot.
You're lukcy to live so close, cheers, Mac

I love everything about this picture ..the controversial (spelling !!) clouds , the wonderful light the astounding view and the obvious love you have for your art !!!
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder... so take this as another big
Click !
Sara

i expect the lush green will start to turn brown when i get there in 3 weeks...oh well, will have to get my macro stuff out again i suppose.
A longer focal length would certainly have helped to isolate some of thos fabulous details and light within the landscape .. in addition moving forward woild have placed you in a better position to make the most of the light ... it's simply 'lacking' impact in its present state.
The clouds at the top are a touch too over cooked too for me ... looks like a bit of enthusiastic burning rather than over filtration ... may have been better with a slightly heavier filter to get the same effect with better control?
Sorry.
Dan

Keith
p.s.
previous Chap shows potential in his spelling as well-too many errors to make a decent remark.
stay well
tonymarq

chris
Without turning your post into a debate I would like to comment RE: Ringyneck's post.
The errors in my post have nothing to do with my lack of spelling ability and perhaps more to do with the fact it was 12.30 and I'd been working from 7.00am solid.
In addition I think it slightly flippant to infer that a misspelled word/s should cause a remark to be worthless and this is something that I feel we should not be promoting on the boards.
I often spot both typo's and spelling errors however that doesn't affect the validity of the posters comment and usually I am able to read between the lines - even with very poor grammar.
As long as the poster conveys their opinion that is all that counts.



gill
LOL Martin, yes I made sure you saw them. I guess a aquare crop will work on this one. I do have a landscape version that works well too.
Yes Mac, lots of people agree. It was very unusual.
Thanks Sara, I like it too.
Terry, yes the layers were very unusual for around here and yes, the dry season is coming soon. So the pressure is on to get those green grass and light shots. There should still be some green in 3 weeks, though the clouds will by shiveling up by then. But you can still expect a couple more rain events before it all goes away until November. And yes, there are lots of updrafts here and the birds hang motionless in the air for long periods of time.
Dan, about the shot itself; the clouds are as they were in the RAW file and I left them alone when I processed it but they were extremely dark and contrasty to my eye. I actually have a landscape version that might work better, as there is less sky. And I'll be reprocessing this one to reduce the contrast in the clouds. Good idea about the longer focal length issue. I actually changed lenses a few times to isolate elements with the 24-105, but I need more practise at that as I'm not quite happy with them. And it took too long to change lenses and the light I saw disappeared too many times.
And I agree with your second comment. See right below.
Keith (ringyneck), thanks for the complement, but I've also made lots of typos in my own comments as well. I often discover them after the one hour limit and then I can't correct them. I have slight dyslexia and am constantly reversing letters. I proofread every comment but they still slip by. (I've corrected 3 just while typing this comment so far) But I still think I make good comments. Also, I want people to feel free to tell me how to improve my shots. So don't attack anybody here. Check out Dan's work and you'll see that he knows a thing or two about photography!
I'll try Tony.
I hope so John!
Patrick
Beautiful lush utopian Dream beautifully composed and pure paradise
Nikki

alex


Greg

Just as an aside I discussed this with Keith via PM and it was amicably resolved. I don't think Keith meant any offence with regards to typo's but obviously some people do take such comments personally.
Just to make this clear I am a BIG fan of Patricks work. I welcome Patricks constructive crit on any of my own posts and feel I genuinely benefit from strong critique from any member.
I look forward to seeing the landscape version of this one too! Sorry for intruding on your photo Patrick ... though I'm sure you don't mind

Dan
PS - Sorry about the clouds. You get more dramatic weather than I do over here in the Uk
Yes Nikki, it can be a paradise sometimes. Often a dry and hot one but still quite nice.
Too bad you can't go up here Alex. Though you may not like the ankle breaking rocks hidden in the grass, or how when the grass dries up, you get millions of stickers in your socks.
Yes Greg, but this green will only last about another month. I've got to get out and get lots of 'green grass' shots.
Dan, I was wondering what happened. I'm glad you sorted it out with Keith (ringyneck). I don't think anybody thought you were doing anything more than analyzing the shot.
I wish we did get more dramatic weather. For example, it is crystal clear right now and the sky is almost black when you look straight up. Not good for photography!
Patrick
That will hurt my knees even more. Think I stick to the south slope of the Etna.! lol
Jan


I really like this shot and the dark clouds don't bother me at all.
Laura


No, clouds are not too dark and brooding. I'm viewing on my calibrated monitor and I love the range of tones. Even in the darkest clouds, the detail is clear. I like this shot a lot -- worth the 6,000 ft of climbing. -=Walter
Paul


Yes Jan, these hillsides are steep and there are lots of crumbly rocks hidden inteh grass. Not good for knees!
They are Laura. I am in better shape thanks to photography.
Yours are fine Adrian. I'm just slightly insane about getting a shot of a place right in the water or up a huge hill.
Thanks Walter. This makes me want to try a B&W conversion. And actually the square cropped version looks good.
Paul, at the top (behind the camera abuot 2000 feet up the slope) they do lots of hang gliding.
Patrick




Colleen



You are getting better and better at lighting up your side of the world, another words~in british terms, the (keithh lit hill look), this is wonderful!
Cheers and have a great Monday.....

Suze
Depth, composition, colours and lighting...it's all there.
Well done!
Garth


It's a pleasure letting your eyes take the "walk" along the ridge, so thanks for letting us see this shot.
Superb...!
Tony...

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