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An evening view of the Mumbles. My first upload for about 2 months due to vision problems which kept me from using the camera, - amongst other things. Hope you like it!

All critique greatfully accepted - both positive and negative.

Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S9500 Zoom
Lens:28-300mm
Recording media:Digital
Title:Mumbles Head and Lighthouse
Username:54 luca 54 luca
Uploaded:25 Sep 2006 - 9:42 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Lighthouse, Mumbles, Swansea
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culturedcanvas
25 Sep 2006 - 9:46 PM

Nice light .. id be tempted to increase the contrast in the foreground tho .. the light falling in the distance is the type of thing that appeals to me personally tho .. Dan

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dave_morgan
26 Sep 2006 - 11:28 AM

Owner of this photo wants to improve and uploaded it to our critique gallery. Please be constructive with your comments

You have achieved a good balance of light and shade without losing f/g detail. The light is typical of late afternoon early evening and you have used it to good effect
in illuminating the headland.

Dave

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nat king
nat king  10
26 Sep 2006 - 12:08 PM

Glad you are able to take photos again! This is a beautiful shot, but I feel there is a slight lack of contrast in the foreground. This could easily be tweaked on a computer.

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54 luca
54 luca  10 Wales
26 Sep 2006 - 6:55 PM

Thanks for your comments folks, I'll have a play with the f/g and see if I can up the contrast a bit.
Cheers
Richard

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culturedcanvas
26 Sep 2006 - 7:00 PM

Hi, thanks for taking the time to mail me .. keep this one up and if you do modify it upload another with the link so the critique team and everyone else can come back and see if it improves it!

Dan

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54 luca
54 luca  10 Wales
26 Sep 2006 - 9:10 PM

Hi Dan,
I have made the suggested modifications and have reposted the image in link http://www.ephotozine.com/gallery/showlargepic.cfm?photoid=729495&start=0
Hope I've captured what you suggested.

Richard

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