Charlie

sanroy99

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25 Aug 2011 - 9:01 PM

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So up lifting, terrific shot.
Roy

TRUEX

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25 Aug 2011 - 9:26 PM

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Edit to above; Reviewing the shots as you shoot from what I said last time to pick up on things like this.

johnnyboy114

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25 Aug 2011 - 10:45 PM

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Kind of agree with Marcus....the pose, the idea, everything about this should be spot on, but that light that is burning out on her face and harshness on the arm is not controlled and it distracts and reduces the effect of the impact. Toning down the light in this, with a reflector to the side that is slightly darker would even this out and eliminate the hot spots.....its very nearly there....

55jase (e2 Member)

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26 Aug 2011 - 4:21 PM

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Thanks people. It was my first ever shoot and i have a lot to learn. I can see were you are comming from with the reflector.
Jase

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17 May 2012 - 5:44 PM

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NICE.
SANJEEV