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handheld at central park, ny..will always be my favorit city

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Tokina 11-16
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Nov 2011 - 10:56 AM
Focal Length:11mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:-2/3
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:NY fall
Username:Abdelrazek Abdelrazek
Uploaded:22 Nov 2011 - 5:58 PM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature
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LynneJoyce
LynneJoyce e2 Member 5LynneJoyce vcard United Kingdom96 Constructive Critique Points
22 Nov 2011 - 7:00 PM

Lovely, but those perpendiculars are out a bit, so I've posted a mod.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
22 Nov 2011 - 8:03 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Quite impressive at first sight, but there is a definate lean to the left and you should have dealt with that. Not sure it is terribly sharp, but may be the size reduction.

Paul

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 9710 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2671 Constructive Critique Points
22 Nov 2011 - 8:21 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its a lovely shot, and New York from Central Park its spectacular this time of year.

Theres a small amount of burn out in the building on the left that can be toned down, and its a little soft. You need to check the resized image before you upload it for sharpness after you saved it, - just open the new file, and apply a little sharpening as needed.

Lynns mod is very nice, - Ive loaded a different take on it, - reduced the blown highlight area, and re composed to get the edge of the lake close to a third, - by removing space at the bottom and adding some sky at the top. Straightened the lean, sharpened and uploaded.
The lean is simply something thats caused by the optics in a very wide lens, - and though it can ve straightened in software, it can also be left, - or you can use it for special effects such as sTaNding close to centre of a tall buiding and shooting straight up along its height, - can be a spectacular shot.


Hope this is helpful


regards



Willie

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