NY fall

paulbroad

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22 Nov 2011 - 8:03 PM

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Quite impressive at first sight, but there is a definate lean to the left and you should have dealt with that. Not sure it is terribly sharp, but may be the size reduction.

Paul

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banehawi (Critique Team)

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22 Nov 2011 - 8:21 PM

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Its a lovely shot, and New York from Central Park its spectacular this time of year.

Theres a small amount of burn out in the building on the left that can be toned down, and its a little soft. You need to check the resized image before you upload it for sharpness after you saved it, - just open the new file, and apply a little sharpening as needed.

Lynns mod is very nice, - Ive loaded a different take on it, - reduced the blown highlight area, and re composed to get the edge of the lake close to a third, - by removing space at the bottom and adding some sky at the top. Straightened the lean, sharpened and uploaded.
The lean is simply something thats caused by the optics in a very wide lens, - and though it can ve straightened in software, it can also be left, - or you can use it for special effects such as sTaNding close to centre of a tall buiding and shooting straight up along its height, - can be a spectacular shot.


Hope this is helpful


regards



Willie

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