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she was the only flower standing among lots of green and boring background, little modifications in LR otherwise she looked and felt exactly like that

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:150.0 mm f/2.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:29 Jun 2011 - 9:18 PM
Focal Length:150mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.9
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:On, Return not detected
Title:Unique
Username:Abdelrazek Abdelrazek
Uploaded:27 Jul 2011 - 9:47 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Flowers & plants, General, Wildlife / nature
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SteveMoulding
SteveMoulding e2 Member 5SteveMoulding vcard United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2011 - 9:51 AM

Superb selective focusing with great dof, almost 3D.
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pamelajean Critique Team 8761 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1591 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2011 - 8:43 PM

This is mullein, Hesham, a very tall herbal and medicinal wild flower that often chooses to "be alone", and you can see it here. Good detail on the flower and a nicely blurred background. You have portrayed it standing proud amongst all the other greenery very well. I would normally suggest that you try to isolate your specimen more by doing a little bit of "gardening", holding back the ferns that are around it, but I think what you have done here works, especially since you were trying to portray a lone plant amongst green foliage. I would probably have chosen a vertical format for this in order to try to portray the fact that it grows extremely tall, some grow up to ten feet. As the image stands, I feel there is a lot of dead space around it and think that a crop to both sides would isolate it more, and you could then remove the yellow patch on the left which draws the eye. However, returning to your description about it being a lone flower, you might prefer to keep quite a bit of space around it, and just perhaps crop the left side.
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