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this has been posted before, but annoyingly I'd got a few niggley things a little wrong (dust, dodgy cloud) so reworked it yesterday when bored. In the spirit of showing the humble RAW file, it will be attached...

This one's a little wider than the original, more space to the right, and the sky's a little more carefully honed... I think...

How....?

Well it's 3 conversions

1 for the sky (there is detail in that RAW)
1 for the colours - grass, valley etc.
1 for the water flow. I made sure it didn't burn out using CP1's highlights option.. though it does look a bit bright when resized BUT it's not burned!

I used the "colours" layer as the background and pasted in the other 2 layers on top, masked them both out completely. Then with a low opacity brush (6%) I painted white on to each layer to bring the sky out and the detail in the stream.

That's my bit for children in need done Smile

Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:Canon 24-105 f4 L IS
Recording media:100 RAW
Title:Wrynose Pass - Rework
Username:ade_mcfade ade_mcfade
Uploaded:17 Nov 2006 - 6:44 PM
Tags:Cumbria, Hardknott, Hardknott pass, Lake district, Lakes, Landscape / travel, Langdale, Wrynose, Wrynose pass
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jakabout
jakabout e2 Member 101741 forum postsjakabout vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 6:48 PM

Nice pic. click.

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 6:56 PM

Cheers Judi

I'm glad we agree on that Smile

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andydub471
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17 Nov 2006 - 7:00 PM

You just have to love the colurs in this shot. Nice one Ade. Like what youve done. Andy

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jaktis
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17 Nov 2006 - 7:01 PM

It is a absolutely stunning waterflow this

Peter

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TerryBaxter
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17 Nov 2006 - 7:04 PM

The water looks furious; like some sort of helter skelter. Great shot.

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:04 PM

shame I deleted the 3 conversions that made it up really - they were HUGE TIFF's so I tend to bin them when I've done. Can always make them again!

Cheers for coments - feel a bit of a fraud re-posting.... but it's a bit different...

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hotchef23
hotchef23 e2 Member 8134 forum postshotchef23 vcard United Kingdom
17 Nov 2006 - 7:07 PM

like it well put together colours lovely sybject stunning
good piccy
rgds
Eric

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John_Duckett
John_Duckett e2 Member 10386 forum postsJohn_Duckett vcard Norfolk Island2 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:11 PM

A really powerful mood image...Love it

John

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C_Daniels
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17 Nov 2006 - 7:17 PM

Deserves some award Ade...

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:24 PM

cheers chaps - any improvement on the last version... that's the main thing I was after finding out Smile

Does the technique "essay" help anyone?

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Slaterm
Slaterm e2 Member 8496 forum postsSlaterm vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:29 PM

great image and clever work to perfect it. Nice to have the breakdown of the workflow. Like this part of the world and you have done it justice here

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starliz
starliz e2 Member 101594 forum postsstarliz vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:34 PM

nice to have before and after Smile and the bit info.
this one is so much clearer lots more visible detail and the colours are more prominent,also the sky is much better looks heavier and more colourful,soz not very good at explaining things but its a definite improvement from my end Smile

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jakabout
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17 Nov 2006 - 7:36 PM


Quote: That's my bit for children in need done Smile

Well done sir. :o) An' fanks.

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:37 PM

that's cool starliz - just what I was after really. the first attempt was a 2 step conversion, just checking that the 3 step one was worth the effort.

thanks Smile

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martin.w
martin.w e2 Member 12355 forum postsmartin.w vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:37 PM

Clueless to the work you have done, but the result is clearer, especially the foreground grasses.

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stevenb
stevenb e2 Member 11260 forum postsstevenb vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 7:50 PM

One of the best landscapes I've on EPZ, top draw good use of shutter speed, perfect lighting ,good composition, deserves an EC ,photo of the week, Well done Ade.

Bill

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G73photography
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17 Nov 2006 - 8:00 PM

very nice , G

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RoddBC
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17 Nov 2006 - 8:04 PM

Dude, you get a click for knowing how to do all of that, and the end result is amazing too. Well done.

Rodd

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 8:09 PM

Cheers Bill - here's hoping eh?

Rodd, send us a PM if you want any info on how it was done - it's one of those thing, easy when you know how! Like riding a bike - fall off loads at first, but get the jist of it and you're sorted

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juldon
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17 Nov 2006 - 8:15 PM

Thanks Ade you know I am always interested in how its been done. I am still "playing" with my RAW stuff. Like you say its easy when you know how.
Getting to grips with the manual setting a bit better now, its just knowing when and which grad to use etc, etc,
The sun came out today and I dashed off but it started raining shortly after. Typical

Julie

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 8:25 PM

It's been driving me mad Julie - I watched 3 cracking sunsets from my desk this week... pitch black when I left the office!!

fancy standing on a motorway bridge one night next week?

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redstag
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17 Nov 2006 - 8:32 PM

Worked to perfection. Love it.
Jon

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DaisyD50
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17 Nov 2006 - 8:44 PM

Wow, great landscape shot! Beautiful colours and I love the power of the water!

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phil_1975
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17 Nov 2006 - 8:56 PM

Impressive work. Just goes to show what can be done to recover the details from a photo. Might have to have a good trawl through my recycle bin now and see if I can add some wizardry to mine!

Phil.

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juldon
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17 Nov 2006 - 9:08 PM

Thanks Ade yes will do, I will pm you as i have a couple of questions for you Smile

Julie

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eos3
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17 Nov 2006 - 9:12 PM

Superb scene. The composition is faultless.

Phil

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hotchef23
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17 Nov 2006 - 9:14 PM

yes the essay helps would love to be able ot do it as i have several images of fantastic sky as per yours and good foreground as per yours, but aint worked out how to put the two together
derrrrrr
ERic

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
17 Nov 2006 - 9:31 PM

there's no "easy" way Eric - just piddling around with masks and stuff... pain in the arse to be honest

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dazzaman
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17 Nov 2006 - 9:37 PM

some cracking cam work ere adrian
darren

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Billlee
Billlee e2 Member 85545 forum postsBilllee vcard England
17 Nov 2006 - 10:44 PM

Amazing result Ade, which is an improvement on the lasr one, even though I did not think that was possible! Bill.

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rontear
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17 Nov 2006 - 11:38 PM

The Lakes, the place to be. This image does it justice Adrian. Ron.

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uggyy
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18 Nov 2006 - 2:08 AM

I love the photo but Im still a little iffy on the sky, with that amount of work done to it I must admit I would be tempted to drop another sky into this one. Its the river thats the star... and how it shines..

Tommy

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baldywhiskers
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18 Nov 2006 - 10:46 AM

beatiful colours - love the wildly unreal river!

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stevenj
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18 Nov 2006 - 9:06 PM

Ade - carry on posting all that info, I find it useful anyway.

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Coleslaw
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19 Nov 2006 - 10:05 AM

Amazing!
the final result is so good compared to the raw files. Makes me think if I have anything I can do in the archive.
I am sure I wont get anything as good as this even if I have your raw file.

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
19 Nov 2006 - 10:39 AM

worth a look, you never know what you can rescue till yo try Smile

Cheers everyone

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brianhaslam
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6 Dec 2006 - 12:08 PM

Hello Adrian,
Replying to your comments from two weeks ago. Thankyou, I have a way to go.
Brian.

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