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a pic of my friend when we travelling to Aceh, Indonesia. i saw this light after rain on a boat. and just shot it Smile

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:24 Jun 2011 - 7:19 AM
Focal Length:50mm
Aperture:f/2.0
Shutter Speed:1/8000sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Sailor
Username:adentenur adentenur
Uploaded:22 Apr 2012 - 8:46 AM
Tags:Flash / lighting, General, Portraits / people
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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 33160 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom102 Constructive Critique Points
22 Apr 2012 - 8:50 AM

Great image, love the silhouette and lens flare.

Regards Nathan

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adentenur
adentenur  2 Indonesia
22 Apr 2012 - 8:56 AM


Quote: Great image, love the silhouette and lens flare.

Regards Nathan

thanks NDODS Smile

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banehawi Critique Team 10849 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2843 Constructive Critique Points
22 Apr 2012 - 4:45 PM

A lovely image with very nice light. I know this was a quick, spur of the moment shot, and your camera was set to f/2. You have good sharpness and outline in the lower area, closer to your camera, and a little softer where his head is, - so f/5.6 would have covered the whole range. But it still works. Ive sharpened the upper area as much as I could in the mod, and cropped a little space from the top. It places both his hand, and his head on a third, so looks good as a composition.


Well done,



regards



Willie

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adentenur
adentenur  2 Indonesia
22 Apr 2012 - 6:03 PM


Quote: A lovely image with very nice light. I know this was a quick, spur of the moment shot, and your camera was set to f/2. You have good sharpness and outline in the lower area, closer to your camera, and a little softer where his head is, - so f/5.6 would have covered the whole range. But it still works. Ive sharpened the upper area as much as I could in the mod, and cropped a little space from the top. It places both his hand, and his head on a third, so looks good as a composition.


Well done,



regards



Willie

waw, thanks for the critique willie!
Smile

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
23 Apr 2012 - 8:42 AM

A fine idea but you needed the sun behind his arm. That would have removed the flare and increased impact even more. Once the foreground shapes are black, they will get no blacker, so you could have reduced exposure further to fill sky detail.

Paul

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Majorwatsisface

Great shot .. Everything in the right place

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