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Alternative Version

Thought I'd put this one up to see the reaction!

Does the treatment work for you?
Is it too much?
Does it spoil the shot?
or is it just a distraction?

I would be very grateful for some frank opinions.
or even a 'I like it' or 'I don't like it'

regards, Adrian.

ISO 100 @ f/8
from the same session as my previous upload.

Camera:EOS 5D
Lens:EF 24-70 f2.8L USM @ 34MM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Does It Work?
Username:AdrianTurner AdrianTurner
Uploaded:6 Aug 2008 - 8:04 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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Votes:14

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SKavanagh
SKavanagh  6312 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
6 Aug 2008 - 8:09 PM

Works for me
Steve

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stevieasp
stevieasp  7 England
6 Aug 2008 - 8:11 PM

Hi Adrian, yes it works because it,s different, could I suggest desaturating the background image or making the others different in some way, maybe a shift in orientation. I expect the original is an excellent image on its own. Great attempt, gets my vote!
Steve

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AdrianTurner
6 Aug 2008 - 8:13 PM

Hi Steve & Steve, thanks for the comments, I did try the backgroung image in greyscale but it was a bit too drastic for me.

Adrian.

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SRC15
SRC15  5 United Kingdom
6 Aug 2008 - 8:17 PM

Nice won

Stuu

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theredbaron
6 Aug 2008 - 10:14 PM

nice detail on the hair was it shot using studio lighting?

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AdrianTurner
7 Aug 2008 - 10:13 AM

Yes Red, using my old Portaflash kit and a Lastolite HiLite.

Adrian

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snapperbryan06

work's very well for me,good comp.well done.Bryan

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digicammad
digicammad e2 Member 1021988 forum postsdigicammad vcard United Kingdom37 Constructive Critique Points
25 Aug 2008 - 6:41 PM

Personally I like it. It would be interesting to see one or more of the squares in mono, perhaps bottom left and/or top right. Any chance of a second version?

Ian

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RoddBC
RoddBC  840 forum posts United States
27 Aug 2008 - 11:54 PM

It works!


Rodd

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fossilized
28 Aug 2008 - 10:28 AM

Interesting and strikingly different shot. I like this best of the three.
Jean

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