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Strumbling Gulls (Revisited)

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A slight rework of an earlier upload but does it work?

All comments appreciated; good, bad or indifferent.

Thanks for looking, Adrian.

Camera:EOS 20D
Lens:EF 16-35L
Recording media:Raw - ISO400
Title:Strumbling Gulls (Revisited)
Username:AdrianTurner AdrianTurner
Uploaded:9 Jul 2005 - 12:56 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Westers
Westers  93905 forum posts Burkina Faso1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2005 - 1:14 AM

Yes, I think it would work as a set of big canvas prints hanging in a bar, etc but doesn't look quite right as a small photo.

Also, the middle block feels a bit awkward as there's nothing going on there - another gull in here could make this better ?

However I do like it, just not as much as the original Smile

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philwig
philwig  9817 forum posts1 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2005 - 1:20 AM

Interesting; as above, perhaps it would work better done big hanging on a wall.

I can't help feeling that I ned to see what's at the bottom of those cliffs.

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AdrianTurner
9 Jul 2005 - 1:22 AM

Cheers Ian & Phil, the lack of subject matter in the middle part of the original is what gave me the idea to split this into three sections but conversely it also troubled me as to whether it would appeal to others. As for me, the jury is still out. ;0)

Adrian.

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AngieLatham
9 Jul 2005 - 1:47 AM

Don't know if I can choose between the two as they both have their own definate quality, but love the idea you have used here. I can see this as three large stretched canvas' on some trendy persons converted warehouse apartment wall!
Nice work Smile
Angie*

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AdrianTurner
9 Jul 2005 - 1:53 AM

Thanks Angie, now all I have to do is to become trendy and find a way to afford a converted warehouse. lol. ;0)

Not sure which will be more difficult and I definitely can't afford the warehouse.

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IanFlindt
IanFlindt  9739 forum posts United Kingdom21 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2005 - 8:57 AM

An unusual, and for me extremely appealing, concept, very well executed. Strangely enough, the centre panel is almost as intriguing as those with the features - it has a tantalisingly purity about it!

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AdrianTurner
9 Jul 2005 - 11:01 AM

Cheers Ian, I must congratulate you on your impeccable taste. ;0)

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cattyal
cattyal e2 Member 96032 forum postscattyal vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
9 Jul 2005 - 1:48 PM

I like the split - it's something I do regularly to my pictures but have yet to show any on this site.

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ellavr
ellavr  1066 forum posts
10 Jul 2005 - 7:39 AM

I love it. I really like the one in the middle with just blue. This is a great concept, very well executed. Excellent.

It would also look good on the wall!

Ella

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clintnewsham
clintnewsham e2 Member 997 forum postsclintnewsham vcard England
10 Jul 2005 - 9:41 AM

i think it works realy well,as has been said,it would look great as a large set of canvas prints,well thought out

click clint

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exclusive  9579 forum posts United Kingdom
11 Jul 2005 - 1:12 PM

i think it is a great idea, i like the 3 blocks and belive over stretched canvas they's look great, with no black border.

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TeresaH
TeresaH  91116 forum posts United Kingdom
14 Jul 2005 - 3:47 AM

Like this very much.

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jeanie
jeanie e2 Member 105968 forum postsjeanie vcard United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jul 2005 - 1:56 PM

I like this image very much. Can imagine it would look super framed.
Jeanie

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johnny_mazoo
2 Aug 2005 - 3:12 PM

Great image. I lik the way you have split it up.

johnny

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